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Old 09-27-05, 06:18 PM   #1
Paranoid
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damn you for usin this beat haha, i was gonna use it but i was like damn enough of these soft soft beats hahaha. jonezy has gotten a lil better, his quality aint to bad his flow is pretty good his vocals could be upped but overall not bad. Vvey Vvey haha i think you coulda came in a little bit sooner and your vocals could be upped a lot more so i could ehar you a bit better. overall nice track.

Saudra And renda diss:
lol @ this played ass beat. Vvey you had a nice volume this time. lyrics weren't to bad good be upped a bit, your flow is alright you could maybe switch it up a bit. emotion could use a bit of work, i'd say this beat isn't really for you ya know.

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