Alchemy™
Why Im I here?........And people are dying?
In New Orleans?And Bush isnt even trying.
Bush is craccing down on free porn......But!
Why is bush still president he shoulda been cut!
Why do people live off Hatred and Love Angers
Why are most youths you see all.....gang bangers
thinkin its a game,Kids die everyday,Whens it gonna stop?
having a wrong color,Can be a reason to make that lead pop
Everytime you step outside,No one is safe,People carry heat
One false move, And your body might lay on the concrete
Why is everyone being drug tested?Why cant we live our life..?
Men getting women pregnant,and not making them there wife.
Why isnt Hatred something,that will go away,and not stay
Never wish death on noone cus it just might be your day
So now eveyone who's readin this before you reply..
Just take a second to think...and Just tell me why?!
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Illus'Artis
Why is every time I step outside hatred fills the sky,
feels like sometimes my mind is set to columbine.
I define rage. Turn my page rage after rage sets the stage.
Inclined when I arrive to this site lie after lie arise, *sighs*
Lets rewind I’m from Brooklyn lines, no burbs, BK derived.
Fallacies, Fat Lies clogs the air Why ?
Because Opey leaped and got stuck in the sky.
Why is there ignorance existent in every instance .
It's in men, yet step to Illus you wont resist his scripts.
Labeled Persistence bashing ignorance. Reluctance
Why heads fear this. kats anticipated, yet never sedated
In their shoes there quaking shaking hence steady hatin.
F this site, everyone in Open Mic, legends no one recognized,
in real life , you think you'll be label nice, think twice.
99.9 percent of ya'll are all hype, RB heads wont amount to ish
it's a risk , but play it, while my drawing are in art exhibits.
Now ask yourself WHY I'm coming like this.
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Paranoid
Why am I lost in this world, convertin on stress?
Nah never will I proceed, when never the less
Contemplatin on hatred, how did I survive in this?
My questions lie responsible of whos alive in this
That aint my problem, my suggestion are to Christ
Pray for hope, say more cope and it’s your light
Quitin to relate with hate, why consider a lie?
Even God has questions, missions pity us to die
Given a second chance, Livin a recon I’d advance
Carrying all of his heart, strength of a lance..
Told me I was his guard, a forever livin peace
Holdin honor, loyalty stole the sin in his heat
Revealin the horrifyin reality a question should..
Bound to complicate more then a lesson could
Give a grear answer with a loud why…
…………………………and live yourself a proud try

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that waz tight nice but tha structure could be better.....

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tay in this bitch shoot 2 kill :shoot

real shit right here

Nice shit, ta ilustrate the track lmao

fav lines:

from Alchemy:
"Why is everyone being drug tested?Why cant we live our life..?
Men getting women pregnant,and not making them there wife"

from illus:
"Labeled Persistence bashing ignorance. Reluctance
Why heads fear this. kats anticipated, yet never sedated"
.... real shit here mayn

from Paranoid:
"Revealin the horrifyin reality a question should..
Bound to complicate more then a lesson could
Give a grear answer with a loud why…
…………………………and live yourself a proud try"

I was realy feelin this whole piece..... 10/10

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Bizzacckkk

wack cause Im not on it, hoes -_-

^lol wherre have you been!?

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Alchemy-
Pretty basic, I wasn't feeling it...Good flow overall, the only best aspect in your verse was the "Imaginary'...the approach is what I wasn't feeling could've been better...But overall Good drop on your part.

Illus'Artis- This is my fav part in this collab..Nice approach and creative by using the site as your concept...Very Nice and creative.

Paranoid- The 2nd best in this collab, Nice emotion and imaginary..Your approach was good too, Keep writing and dropping.


Overall- This was a Nice lil collab...My fav 2 writers in this collab was ILLus'Artis and paranoid...Both had a very good creative approach and Nice Emotion in both of there verses. Alchemy I felted that you was the weakest link in this collab wasn't Much good to say about your verse because it was basically basic and not creative, but overall good collab..

Peace, leave feed on my newest OM "Your Time is Up"...

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mystery Is a Freak!!

ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

I really didnt come that good...was high when i wrote it -_-

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