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Old 10-01-05, 02:21 AM   #1
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Old 10-01-05, 02:28 AM   #2
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I was liking this beat already anyway, so thats already a plus
when you started rappin, it first had threw me off, because listening to the beat's singin quality, then hearin you rap. it was off.
but nvm that, I can understand exactly what you're saying, and in my opinion, thats all that matters for now.

Now, to the actual song,..its not really my steez. Maybe because I like the beat, I was expectin too much of you, but I dont like your approach to the beat. the fast flow was on point, you didnt fall off, and you had delivery, but this just isn't the type of shit I usually listen to, nahsayen?
like for example, if I like Cassidy, then there's a good chance that Im not goin to like someone like Chamiillionaire.
Its not what Im accustomed to listenin to.
but, like I said, you flowed to the beat well, and you had delivery and all, but Im not feelin it
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious

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Old 10-01-05, 03:00 AM   #3
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Old 10-01-05, 03:00 AM   #4
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The Chorus sound familiar, VERY familiar... just don't remember how I heard it, cuz the beat don't sound familiar lol..

I hate this beat... you ride it well tho, lyrics decent... your flow's really good.. I like what you did wit the beat, cuz i can listen to this and the beat grows on me because of your flow.

I got a love for fast flows, this snatched my ear fa real and the quality sounds good...

I'd collab wit you mos def, on some twista type track or something... stay up, good work..

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Old 10-01-05, 01:46 PM   #5
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fuckin fabolouse wannabe...

yea u did ya thang am feelin the beat...kneegrow get at ya old fam and lets collab
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Old 10-01-05, 02:39 PM   #6
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i wanna know how he's a Fabolous wannabe
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 10-01-05, 02:47 PM   #8
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Old 10-03-05, 01:04 AM   #9
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Old 10-03-05, 04:06 AM   #10
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Personally i hate that song and the beat. your flow was real cool. i like tha fast paced flow. and you stayed on point throughout. you sounded kinda bored though. i didnt find much interest in it cause it sounded really boring. your lyrics werent very good either. but i do like the flow. that was probly the only thing i liked in it.
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Old 10-03-05, 12:38 PM   #11
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lyrics were ok...your flow was dope ill give you that. i thought the beat was pretty tiight..not really much to critque here..overall not bad of a track
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Old 10-03-05, 04:53 PM   #12
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a yo your flow was good and you got the prescence of a rapper on the mic, its just quality that messes it up just like most of us
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Old 10-04-05, 11:26 AM   #13
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Beat: I like it
Flow: sounds like u can do a fast flow...I'd love to collab wit u on this style
Rhyming: not bad
Delivery:nto bad


Overall:love the vibe here

I would like to collab dawg



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