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10-06-05, 12:29 PM
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(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=210752) (please peep this)
wow! hay look homey hate to say kit but you're not quiet on MADDRAPPER'S level hey that cat multi-rhyme vocab dude anyway this was all right for a shake and bake pies !. i tneeds vocab 2. didn't rhyme enough 3. no punchlines 4. it didn't hold th eaudience interest bu tkeep dropping i know you will improve keep up the good work Last edited by gladbag : 10-06-05 at 01:33 PM. |
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