Hmm somin i noticed on this, your voice faded in and out really awkwardly, the flow was alright. after you did the first hook there and then layered your verse wit that gurl/normal voice it sounded wierd. the lyrics are actually pretty good. the beat is pretty good too, i can see your coming along way with your audio skills I'm glad you never quited. but anyway props and this is a pretty good song man.

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