Ur Slim to Nun...like Em movin in a church wit Kim
Like An unwanted Aim Message
....................I'm Quick to Delete an I.M.
^^ok concept, but forced wordplay, since I.M. is pronounced Aiy-em and Impression starts with, well Im, kinda works in text though, s'ok. Rhyme is also very simple or non-existant if ya take the I.M. pronounciation

vs.



my punches'll stick u easy. & u aint even high in the ranks.
cuz u didn't have the RIGHT GUARD...
...and its the only reason y all ya verses fuckin stanks.
^^nope. Messed it up. If him not having a deodorant/right guard is the ONLY reason his verses stank then that means he is good, because there is nothing else stopping his verses from being good. Shot yourself in the foot, by my understanding.

v/Young Blaze

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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant
And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack
Skills is what you lack
I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac
Ya more like a Reagal
I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel