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10-30-05, 05:34 PM | #46 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: D4CB 508F
Yea son def elevated alot playa...flow was on point but ya delivery really stood out..I remember when u was blan an emotionless o tracks now u got ya shit right......beat was koo....not spectacular but koo....lyrically wasn't bad...punches was ah'ight nothing was crazy but decent...wasn't fellign hook....u let beat play too much...coulda dun alot more wit dat...but overall real solid track....keep droppin dat heat son.....1
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10-30-05, 05:49 PM | #47 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5110 D605
fo sho homie.. appreciate the feedback. and yeah i did.
and again. imma change up the hook
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10-30-05, 06:52 PM | #48 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 8F3C C3B1
Yeah, the intro's cool, doe sounds like Slim Thug, doe.
Bad things (3 in all): 1. why'd you say you don't have guns? You gotta do the opposite: BRAG about how you got heaters. 2. The beat kinda sucks...probably cuz it sounds like that J-Kwon beat. 3. Your accent kinda throws me. But over all I give it a 7.6/10 Okay stuff, man. |
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10-30-05, 07:08 PM | #49 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5110 D605
naww homie im sayin i dont a gun..i aint no fake nigga..but its easy to get one...whenever i have serious beef..thats when the guns come out naww meanz ..but thanx for the feedback..and what fuckin accent!?!? LOL
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10-30-05, 07:43 PM | #50 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 1628 4BC6
this shit is fire man, the hook and the verse's, you had a better delivery to me on this than what you usually do, the hook was hott and your hooks are usually catchy, and your quality has gotten alot better then what it used to be, also your creativity is alot better
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10-30-05, 08:30 PM | #51 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5110 D605
thanx famz...i appreciate it.....
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10-30-05, 08:49 PM | #52 | ||||
I Chill in Asylums
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IP: 448F 3D8E
The Intro on this track i loved cuz like Ltizzle said it gives an up and comin star feel. The first verse was aight but the second verse kinda brought it back for me. The lyrics were pretty good. Chorus was aight but all together its was a nice track.The beat i loved by the way. And one more thing i think u need to relax a lil bit cuz ur flow a lil stressed. I give it an 8/10.
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10-30-05, 09:12 PM | #53 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5110 D605
stressed..DAMN U ITS NOT STRESSED IM EXPRESSIN THAT I GOT NO LICENSE BUT ROLL IN A LEXUS lol
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10-30-05, 09:12 PM | #54 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: BF56 CF93
intro lol dooms sounds mean lol his voice is jsut menacing really
flow was on point throughout really did hear any flaws so props on thsi uve elevated alot here emotion you got this pretty much on lock ur layed back yet hyped iono loveing it lol you had great clarity i heard every word reall crisp props on this you dont see this that much on here chorus like everyone else not feeling it lol are you going to repost the new version? overall goodtracl 7.5 for stats
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10-30-05, 10:03 PM | #55 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 5110 D605
thanx ma. and repost new version? ill just edit it
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10-31-05, 02:15 AM | #56 | |||||||
You Love My Style.
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IP: 2108 B767
Ayo Famz this shit is Hot..!! yo flow and delivery is nice...adlibs came out well....this has to be one of ya top trackz...namsaying....u did ya thang B we need to drop on that beat i send ya
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10-31-05, 03:28 AM | #57 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: ECB3 36A0
Yo, this song is dope, good club banga. The beats ok but not really feeling it. The hook could've been abit more complex, was abit plain. But overall the song is Pretty hot, keep it up man.
Overall - 8/10 |
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10-31-05, 05:56 AM | #58 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: C9F3 EA19
thanx famz i appreciate it. And DV im down. I dont have the beat no more though :S
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10-31-05, 09:37 AM | #59 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: C11A 6193
Lmao @ intro, Dooms does sound all mean haha...but gives something extra to the track though...he sounds all hyped up near the end lmao
The beat is DOPE, I'm loving that beat and it's so suited for this type of track. You can definitely see the club headbanging to this shit you know. Your lyrics are good for this type of track, you brought a decent level of complexity to it in fact. The flow is on point throughout the entire track. Your delivery is good, got that hyped up, grimey vibe going on. I'm feelin that shit man... Hook yeh, I agree with people...could've been more complex but the concept behind it is good you know... Keep it up (feedback to learn rankings in RG)
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10-31-05, 04:33 PM | #60 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: C3F9 69A7
iight thanx ma appreciate the feedback
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