RapVerse.com Community - please critique my stuff

11-15-05, 01:30 AM

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Alright Verse Was Cool..Rhyme Scheme Sucked Though Work On That Fam...Also Work On Vocab...Structure Was Decent Delivery Came Well Nice Going Man

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