I made this last night..... first song in a long time...been real busy lol wit school and shit.....Its Called "Come And Get Me"....

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ur voice/delivery/flow are nice


wud like to hear more internal rhymes to pull off your rhyme scheme...


am I one of the homies in DC?

haaa


beat is slick


quality is good

beat could actually be deamped a notched or ur vocals upped just 1 notch


good drop


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Youtube Video for my song "CARRY ON"

ok, nice full-bodied beat. The vocals are about 2-3dB's too high. The hook was ehh okay. - shoulda also added some more reverb to em to make it easier to distinguish a hook form the verse since the feel of the sound would be different.

First verse: the flow is usually pretty good, once a blue a stumble but I've seen mainstreamers make the same mistake. The lyrics are nice and relevant, sticks to a topic so that alone keeps my attention. The first verse seems shorter than a 16 for some reason.

The second verse didn't have the same topic as the first one so it made the song seem random. You should have also switched up your flow for the second verse since it was starting to soudn a little redundant - add to that the straying topic and I started to 'zone out' and not lsiten, but just hear it. The first verse I listened the whole way through intently. Not a bad song, but the main thing that stands out as a flat spot is the hook. I'd re-write the hook and re-spit the second verse and make this the song that it could be, instead of the song that it is. Not BAD by any means, jsut not GREAT. I'd listen to it again.

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Nice shit man.......I'm liking it. It's kinda laid back shit, but it's got a little emotion to it as well. I agree with Dooms about the hook though. It didn't really stand out as a hook, but I liked the song as a whole.......good shit man ™

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word @ Tennessee.....lol

only complaint i have is......make the hook stand out...add the chorus effect to one of the stacks or something....and itll be nice...i liked this shit for real though....if some dude at the mall let me listen to this song cause he wanted me to buy his mixtape...id buy it....

i liked it...good stuff...just add that chorus effect

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thanks for the feeeed upppppinnnn

Nice beat, Good flow, chours needs some work... But overall its a decent track, also need some emotion work.. overall 7.5/10..

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thanks for the feedback word