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Old 11-20-05, 03:28 AM   #3
Ltizzle
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word yo, A-Team

hook kinda coo, i dont really think you fit the whole crunk scene ike on this song...
your delivery needed to be a bit more crunk, lil bit more wild and shit..like you was bouncin wit lil jon, lol.
your verses lyrics is hot, the flow is real smooth...just work on deliveyr im thinking, otherwise real real nice.

im liking chron on this
if only his quality was a bit better, his shit would be madd nice
flow is real smooth, lyrics is str8
def liking the delivery though, i think it fits the crunk scene real nicely

overall yall had a hot track, go hit up me and mad knights track...and go a-team
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