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Old 11-14-05, 12:21 PM   #16
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it would sound hot audio, i dont like the rhyme scheme, but thats just me, im picky...the overall portrayal of the message is powerfull, and delivered within context on your approach....well done bitch, lets do an OM hoe slut cock fuck bitch vagina woot
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Old 11-14-05, 12:24 PM   #17
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Deal, I love you and miss you baby.
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Old 11-14-05, 12:30 PM   #18
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the misses says you're weird man
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Old 11-14-05, 12:35 PM   #19
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I saw -H-I-M- lastnight, and I'm in North Bay with my girlfriend. Tell the misses I'm in a loving mood, and that the only thing that could wreck it is Bertuzzi punching me in the back of the head like a criminal.
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Old 11-14-05, 12:39 PM   #20
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bertuzzi got a hat trick, haha
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Old 11-14-05, 08:10 PM   #21
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Probably stole 2 goals. Fuckin' criminal.
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Old 11-15-05, 01:18 AM   #22
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was a nce topic but a lil 2 normal 2 me it flowed well but its missing something jus a lil 2 simple...i dunno maybe im not us 2 this type of style n e ways good drop keep postin
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Old 11-15-05, 04:32 PM   #23
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RB please could ya rtf on this....

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214659

thanx mate
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Old 11-17-05, 09:22 AM   #24
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Word, will do mate.
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Old 11-22-05, 11:12 AM   #25
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Give me feed. Like woah!
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Old 11-23-05, 08:57 PM   #26
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this was very thought provokin man 4 real u came real deep on this
this is my type of writing seriusly man keep it up
8/10
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 11-25-05, 03:29 PM   #27
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dopeness........uppin.........
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