Left feed on LE's new one, and Will Appear and ill G's track... (as well as like prolly 15-20 since i dropped my last track)

It's rough right now, but I'm lovin this beat. Peep game:

http://phenom-in-all.dmusic.com/

Phenom - Red Bandana

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i already told you love the ebat off in a few parts btu will be dope when u rerecord and add some nice adlibs props on thsi cant wait to hear the finished version

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Siiince you hit me on AIM.. I'll drop feed.

Beat is bonkers. I like that shit too. You shoulda hit me for a collab over this shit but oh weeeeell.

Anyways.. Flow is a little off like you said but shit sounds nice. Content is cool. Only suggestion I'd make is watch how you deliver it. If you laid yourself back slightly.. maybe a bit more cocky and put more personality into your verses.. you'd be nice with it. Just my 2 cents. Shit's nice tho.

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Robert L. Rem
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dope beat. shit the way your voice sounds gives me the chills. not in a gay way. just makes me wanna write. good job on this. keep up.

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red bandanas...u in the bloods? lol beat is ill, like that guitare mixed with piano, nice quality, like the sample, reminds me of some dipset shit, nice flow, nice lyrics, overall pretty dope track, im just lazy to leave longer feed

peace

listening through my usual Audio Technicas.

Who ever's up first, on that mic, they sound muffled as FUCK. beats' hot, nice sample usage, and props for who ever produced it and not doing the generic move of making the sample a wack 2003 highpitched voice.

Phen, you need to EQ the highs on your vocals to open em up because they're muffled to hell. The lyrics are nice, liek the funeral line, the donald trump line, etc. Your flow went rushed on a line or three. You need another layer and SLIGHTLY more reverb to make your hook come out. Either that or you just rhymed through the hook.

Second verse's review is the same as the first. There's some clicking noise or something that soudns like mic handling noise in the back ground. Or liek you're typing or something. Pretty good track, but it sounds jew'd out on the fidelity. Yeah, I said it. Jew'd out. Why you skimping on the fidelity? that's the #1 way to rape your track into a position of "okay" whne it coulda been "good". Just makes the music sound cheap. etc etc yadda yadda yadda 1

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