as usual, inactive poetry forum. anyways.

Very nice.

First part.
Rhymed very well, and kept it smooth and fluent. Vocabulary wasn't too drastic at all, but did very well without it.

Second part.
I liked the color idea, It was good, but kept level and idnt really elevate or fall anywhere.

A smooth and emotional poem.
very nice work guys.

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