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Old 01-26-06, 10:49 AM   #1
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So Serious (feat. Fate)

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yeh ... after i dropped this whit him... he took the instrumental... n his verse n changed things up n cut me out... put a whole commercial feel to it n i couldnt fux whit it again lol... but heres the original...

http://soundclick.com/unspokenvirtue - So Serious . Hes first... im 2nd.

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Old 01-26-06, 02:07 PM   #2
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Your using the same link twice- fix it by tommorow or ima lock this... pm me with a different link to have it unlocked if its not fixed in time.
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Old 01-26-06, 03:48 PM   #3
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dis beats hard...1st cat lyricz is coo flows aiight deliverys ok...2nd dude lyricz is str8 flows aiight deliverys coo...overall da tracks pretty solid 4 da most part...keep it up

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Old 01-26-06, 06:09 PM   #4
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beat is ok
voice is cool
flow is good
lyrics played nothing creative
delivery is real layed back id liek to hear a little bit more energy pretty good though
2nd guy i hate ur voice flow is ok off in a few places lyrics are ok
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Old 01-26-06, 06:16 PM   #5
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post up another link ur first one is invalid
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Old 01-26-06, 08:00 PM   #6
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works fine for me...

lmfao @ hatin my voice... to each is own homeboy...
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Old 01-27-06, 01:52 AM   #7
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ok pm me with another link if you want this opened


Links received in a PM- Re-opened.- Sev.
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Old 01-27-06, 02:32 PM   #8
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... On the rise...
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Old 01-27-06, 02:42 PM   #9
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Aight

First person

Flows nice

Lyrics Are Koo

Deliverys Koo,Feelin Your Presence In This

Emotions Koo

Lmao@BRAAAHHH

Your Mic Seems To Go Quiet

2nd Dude:

Lyrics Are Better I Think

Flow Fall Off A Few Times

Deliverys Koo

Emotions Koo

Presence Is Nice,Seem Confident

Overall:
7/10

Keep Up!

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