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02-12-06, 12:31 AM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
uppin this for some more feedback.................
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02-12-06, 04:41 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!! !!!!!!!!!!
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02-12-06, 05:10 PM
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New to RV
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IP:
This is a pretty nice piece. Your imagery was used very well and you had some nice multis in there aswell. the flow of this was decent aswell due to the almost perfect structure. this was a extremely good job, Hit Up My Om On 1st Page.
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02-12-06, 07:39 PM
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IP:
Nice rhyme scheme, good on the interlocking tip... decent content... pretty good use of vocab... overall fairly dope drop... everything else has been pretty much already said... keep doing what you do...
RTF Fallacy
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02-12-06, 08:48 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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thanks homie....i'll rtf once i'm done cleaning my room
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02-13-06, 09:15 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP:
Yo this shit was hot............If you did audio i mgith just try to get you on a track....stay up and get audio.....
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02-13-06, 09:36 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
i'm gonna upload a bunch of my shit soon and then i'll holla at you soon
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02-14-06, 09:58 AM
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OYD
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IP:
nice vocab and overall good rhyming
would like to see more similies and a central theme though good piece |
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02-14-06, 10:20 AM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
thanks for the feedback q............uppin for more
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02-14-06, 05:09 PM
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Light Weight
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fire man..keep spittin that shit..best vocab ever.
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02-14-06, 05:10 PM
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP:
thanks for the feedback homie......uppin
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