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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
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02-12-06, 02:44 PM
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IP:
Really really short, but i liked it, u had good metaphors, your emotion was meh and your imagery was good due to the metaphors, your vocab was nice, and i think i saw some multis in their somewhere, only thing i would tell you to do is make this longer. 1
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