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02-19-06, 01:42 PM | #16 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
Thanks man, i'll get you.
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02-20-06, 07:05 AM | #17 | |||||||
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IP: 4642 D197
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Intro i like how ya put jay-z on. Beat is nice i really like it. Flow is dope it fits nice. Lyrics are great, liking em'. Delivery is dope which makes ur presence way better. Hook is aight but like Inter said to many gaps. Your emotion is great and fits the track! |
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02-20-06, 02:28 PM | #18 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
quality is tight i think.....like this beat..jay shit was nice....u sound like a west coast head....lyric was pritty tight...nuthing stood out realy...but was nice...idk about the spelling shit....nice multis here n their...door close line was nice..gets a bit deeper towards the end...still not feeling the spelling shit tho..good track tho
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02-23-06, 06:43 PM | #19 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
i dont think ive ever heard g: deuce on audio b4, o well, here goes nuthin, lol...
...listenin, im lovin the intro, nice lyriks and im also feelin the beat but i feel like your delivery coulda been a lil better...overall this shitt was hott tho, only thing i think could be better is delivery but thats all...nice job mayne could ya rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977 |
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02-24-06, 01:54 AM | #20 | ||||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 57FB 0ECE
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STFU, it was to me. Christ, nobody can take a fucking critque nowadays.
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