^yea the intro is nice...

...i gotta listen in lo-fi but it kinda sounds like the first verses wualtiy might need work, cant exactly tell tho, flyriks, flow, and delivery is nice in first verse, good emotion too...2nd verse (quality thing must jsut be my lo-fi shit), similar flow to the first verse, still good flow, lriks, and delivery, lol at some fo the stuff...3rd verse definitly ahs an original flow and is different from the other two, im likin this flow, nice delivery, lyriks are pretty nice too...thsi song is nice, propz

btw, could yall plz rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977