listenin...

...not feelin beat

1st verse- nice lyrics and tite voice...pretty good delivery and emotion...propz

2nd verse- another nice voice...really nice delivery, emotion and flow...decent lyrics, this is a ncie verse...

3rd- voice doesnt go great with others but that dont affect the verse...good lyrics...good delivery and nice flow...good job

LMAO!!! at the outro, that pancake line jsut raised the song upp like 3 whle #'s

overall- i think this song has a ton of potential and would be SO DOPE, but i honestly dont think this is the rite beat for that song,,, good job on the verse tho yall, they themsekves were hott

*btw coulld yall rtf
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