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Thiz was more of something that Ud Here on da Mic...i think i would have been able to feel it better...but overall. this was a DeCent PoSt..I cant critique to much, cuz im not that great my Self...

Ya Vocab kinda on da Low, Side, try going thru a thesaurs to add more weight to ur lyrics...

Otha, than that, i Think ya gonna be on da Road, u stay at it...

YUP!

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