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Old 03-11-06, 01:40 AM   #1
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Yo sup? Im new here, looking to get sme feedbak on my tracks. I already introduced my self in dat section, now I did my feedbak, now I want 2 no wat people think of me. I've only been rapping for 8 months let me no wat u think. '1'

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Old 03-11-06, 09:23 AM   #2
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i listened to the soldier track....lyrics are a lil simple.....flow is pretty good....decent track....not really feelin the beat but i like the emotion you showing.....7/10 keep it up
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Old 03-11-06, 01:15 PM   #3
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thanks 4 da feedbak!
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Old 03-11-06, 02:38 PM   #4
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you diddnt specafy a track...so i'll feed "solders"

beats a bit diff..in a ...ehh idk..to loud IMO..

hoook is iight

1st beat- quality is ok but ur to loud...and the beat dont help....emotion is good...delevery is ehh..flow is nice man...lyrics r basic gangsta shit....voice is nice

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Old 03-11-06, 02:57 PM   #5
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Thanks I'll work on da volumes of stuff 2 make it sound a lil betta. '1'
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Old 03-11-06, 10:11 PM   #6
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pretty good keep up the work
i like your mic presence but contue the good work
your flow was nice
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Old 03-12-06, 12:08 AM   #7
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thanks feeling everybodys feedbajk, I'll b sure 2 post anthor track soon, when i get a new 1.
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