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Old 03-11-06, 04:56 PM   #1
Yung Miss
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my moment of clarity.......miss' first keystyle

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Wont have my moment of clarity till they bury me
No drama like maryb, so y wont happiness marry me
Recently known as the black widow, starin out the window
But itz on tint tho so…………..
The world cant see my pain, cant see my gain
Gotta spit logic just so they can see my brain
Drained ,no energy mind runnin on empty
Wearin my nikes the only time the force is wit me
Forcing guilty verdicts on my soul I remain whole
Hearted known my purpose in the game since I started
Those who been there for me like CONNIE YA SCARIN ME
But itz wearin me out, I need a reasonable doubt like jayz
I need hova but not the one from the take ova
The one who gives spiritual make ovas, yes that hova
Need grace like topher, amazingly I find it in sweet sound
That saves wretches like me when im feelin down
Depression knockin at the door so I gotta face this
Im ready to die as long as the coffin is spacious
Base this on the inspiration of the lives of my peepz
Whose faiths done faded away and they refuse take a leap
Black sheep pickin me as the sheperd
But im too contagious livin the life of a leper
Let her speak her mind thatz what the crowd chants
So I chant back and tell them I cant
I cant continue to put on a smile, and leave my emotions in the closet
On a hanger ,cryin,wanna b happy, haagen daz it
Whole tub of rocky road on this rocky road
Big load to carry but he don’t give me more than I can hold
Stop for second, maybe 60 and give me a minute
If he didn’t want me in this world then y he put me in it
Give me cash so I can spend it and be broke the next day
Generation seemz quiet so I wonder what the next say
Im flexin my fingerz putting down what been hidden for years
True feelingz, need healing, aint got no more tearz
So when I cry itz dry , I don’t show no emotion
Wordz is strong, so people say my rhymes is potent
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Old 03-12-06, 01:57 PM   #2
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I was really feeling this. It was an nice OM for your first keystyle and all. I was liking the multies you had. Good concept. But keep elevating and all. If i had to score this it would get a 7/10. But you did your thing on this one. Keep droppin.
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