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03-11-06, 04:56 PM | #1 | |||||||
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my moment of clarity.......miss' first keystyle
IP: 2029 97B3
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7 deadly sins feed feed Wont have my moment of clarity till they bury me No drama like maryb, so y wont happiness marry me Recently known as the black widow, starin out the window But itz on tint tho so………….. The world cant see my pain, cant see my gain Gotta spit logic just so they can see my brain Drained ,no energy mind runnin on empty Wearin my nikes the only time the force is wit me Forcing guilty verdicts on my soul I remain whole Hearted known my purpose in the game since I started Those who been there for me like CONNIE YA SCARIN ME But itz wearin me out, I need a reasonable doubt like jayz I need hova but not the one from the take ova The one who gives spiritual make ovas, yes that hova Need grace like topher, amazingly I find it in sweet sound That saves wretches like me when im feelin down Depression knockin at the door so I gotta face this Im ready to die as long as the coffin is spacious Base this on the inspiration of the lives of my peepz Whose faiths done faded away and they refuse take a leap Black sheep pickin me as the sheperd But im too contagious livin the life of a leper Let her speak her mind thatz what the crowd chants So I chant back and tell them I cant I cant continue to put on a smile, and leave my emotions in the closet On a hanger ,cryin,wanna b happy, haagen daz it Whole tub of rocky road on this rocky road Big load to carry but he don’t give me more than I can hold Stop for second, maybe 60 and give me a minute If he didn’t want me in this world then y he put me in it Give me cash so I can spend it and be broke the next day Generation seemz quiet so I wonder what the next say Im flexin my fingerz putting down what been hidden for years True feelingz, need healing, aint got no more tearz So when I cry itz dry , I don’t show no emotion Wordz is strong, so people say my rhymes is potent |
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03-12-06, 01:57 PM | #2 | ||||
Semper Fi
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IP: 0825 899A
I was really feeling this. It was an nice OM for your first keystyle and all. I was liking the multies you had. Good concept. But keep elevating and all. If i had to score this it would get a 7/10. But you did your thing on this one. Keep droppin.
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