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03-21-06, 02:32 AM
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That was pretty whack dude sorry work on your rhymes dont rhyme simple words try to get bigger words and in your second line break the big word up in to a copule that rhyme with the bigger one or do double rhymes where the last two words rhyme and use internal rhymes that come quick off the tongue it makes it flow better
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03-21-06, 02:47 AM
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what dat be...
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ok thanks man always need help |
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