for starters, I HATE synthesized beats liek this so I'm relaly just gonna speak no the lyrics.

You need better mixing on your vocals and definitely bump your lows to give you more warmth in the voice. Hook's ok. Typical clubby stuff. Lyrics during the first verse are somewhat what I'd expect from a song on a beat like this, 'I'm the best' 'this is my city' 'I'm the king' etc etc etc, the usual stuff.

lmao @ shouting out the flea market in the local locales lol.

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