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11-04-05, 11:47 AM | #1 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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Memo to Love
IP: 11AF 50EC
Eyes closed while I...
dream of dreams while dreaming of nightmares dreamed to be realities... The same realities that turned back to dreams of reality.... "What’s the difference between this dream from my reality?" I ask... As My... Heart changes paces from fast to slow while slowly changing back to fast... The thoughts in my mind become vivid as if I'm thinking out loud while loudly thinking... Dressed in my desire to cheat on my mind wit my heart I... Find myself falling into a mixture of a variety of situations.... Even though I promised myself not to believe promises promised by significant others that.... Promise to for fill promises that eventually become emptied into rivers of emptiness... I still reach upon stars of hopeful happiness that eventually becomes hopeless sorrow.... Blazed thru my approach in reefer sessions I... REMINISCE on a previous REAL LOVE to find out WHAT'S THE 411 of my present thru MARY J.... The Grey Goose bottles that get tipped over into my esophagus is 40 PROOF of what love has done to me... With a Cupid Arrow-Proof vest strapped on... I dodge Valentines Days while weaving thru sweetest day just to give thanks on thanksgiving looking forward to being single by Christmas... Shit..... maybe being lonely isn’t so bad.... Though of course you have to deal wit the side effects from lack of love.... The daily back-rubs and questions to how my day was disappear into a midst of selfish company and inconsistency... Am I happy you ask? My mind helps me answer wit yes while my heart screams no... Weaken thru weekends of loneliness and desperation for love and happiness... I'm beginning to realize that this vest I'm wearing becomes pointless to what I really want.... Am I ready for love? The real question you should be asking me is... Is love ready for me? I've tried you before.... I pray that you don't disappoint me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213009 Last edited by Lil C : 11-04-05 at 11:53 AM. |
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03-02-06, 09:29 AM | #2 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: B6A6 A397
Hmm nice poem! ............
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03-02-06, 04:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 7F56 75C0
Too bad its not yours!
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03-16-06, 09:56 PM | #4 | ||||
Can u guess 2v's Gender?
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IP: 6580 C051
needs work but its coo.
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03-17-06, 07:01 PM | #5 | ||||||
Bone is gay.
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IP: 4242 4FE8
This was an okay piece... the imagery was decent not to great but decent... the structure was competly off along with the flow i mean you mad this look ugly as hell and im not trying to mean im just being honest.... You dont always have to center things and yeah the people posting before me are you sayin this was bitten?
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03-18-06, 03:19 PM | #6 | |||
Dont Fuck With Me! EZ....
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IP: 2676 E146
this was preety good, i was feeling it the emotion was there i dont know exsactly how to go about poems like this cuz its been done befor but each time the song topic never gets boring...
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03-28-06, 02:01 PM | #7 | |||
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IP: 3240 794D
Pm me one link to have this re-opend.
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