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03-22-06, 02:28 PM | #1 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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Walkin Down A Dark Path
IP: B910 5651
Dispursed Into Splinters Into A Hurse Durin Winter
Burst, Decayin For I Splurt The Words Of A Sinner My Presence Sentenced To Exile And Venture A Path Measure What I Treasure, I Head For Pressure And Wrath Deed's Only Managed To Get Me Vanished And Chained Judged In A Criminal's Sactum, I'm Averagin Pain My Mind Peels As My Toughts Sprout At A Higher Rate I'm Lookin For A Guidin Hand Like A Being At A Minor Age Seachin In Every Buildin So I Don't Get Killed In This Journey I Dropped My Shallow Mind Into Hell Consequently, Too Early That It Is Surely, Or Am I Not Worthy Of A Spot In Heaven Sit In A Golden Chizzled Chair Next To My Church's Reverand For I Fail To Seize What Impaled My Seed To Shear Evil Dragged To The Depths Of The Crater To Fear That Mear Lethal And Torturing Demon, Am I Dreamin Or Is This A Simple Illusion Souls Clashin, Road Crashin Into A Barren Wasteland Of Internal Brusing Under The Casted Shadows Given From My Sins I Depart To Another Dimension Were I Come To Begin A New Chapter In Life, A New Written Story About Me So I'm Waitin For A Guiding Hand To Route Me Soul Scattered So I'm Unable To Find This Puzzle's Meaning I Hustle, Scheaming For A Crack In This Struggle, Screaming For I Open The Double Doors And Dust Particles Fill The Entrance Creekin Sound Pounding My Ears, I Can Sense The Devil's Presence Tremble As His Essence Is Ingulgin The Room With A Vast Impact Bones Crack, Throat Snaps, Hands Wither As My Wrist's Crack While My Souls Being Devoured By The Mear Stare In His Vision Traveled Through My After Life To Discover My Secret Mission I Fed Ambitions And Nurtured Theft, But Hoped To Earn Respect To Realize I Ain't Worth A Spek Til I Visualize, I'm Burned And Wrecked But Threw The Prayers I Chanted, Fool...Took My Savior For Granted So I'm Senteced To Judgement, But Came To This Crater And Paniced So I'm Peeled Cell, By Cell, While I'm Rubbed Into Particles For My Spark Becomes Another Failure In The Newspapers' Articles So While I Gasp For Air And Shed A Final Tear Of Painful Recognition I Looked At The World And Hope They Realized What The Core Was Missin |
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03-24-06, 11:19 AM | #2 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 3077 AA16
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03-24-06, 11:56 AM | #3 | |||||
Not_Indeph
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IP: 19CE EBA7
I'ma feed on this when I get back from the store.
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03-27-06, 10:12 AM | #4 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 80E0 04BB
well feed on it now hoe! and if you blocked me on aim, unblovk me........
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03-27-06, 10:13 AM | #5 | |||||
Not_Indeph
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IP: 8BDA 4BED
you not blocked, and I'm still at the store, I can't decide if I want chex party mix or traditional.
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03-28-06, 04:59 PM | #6 | |||||||
Motivation=Money
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IP: 1838 762D
I gotta show this some love its a real nice piece i can visualize what you sayin you set a dark mood and kept it flowin the flow was nice nice vocab good structure on point with everything i give this a 8.5/10
RTF Links in sig hit up either one you want
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03-29-06, 12:04 AM | #7 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
party mix hoe!!!! thanks for the feedback now feed deph................
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03-29-06, 01:41 AM | #9 | |||||||
Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
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IP: 0BD5 203C
Thanks for the feedback rey...............
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