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Old 03-22-06, 02:28 PM   #1
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Walkin Down A Dark Path

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Dispursed Into Splinters Into A Hurse Durin Winter
Burst, Decayin For I Splurt The Words Of A Sinner
My Presence Sentenced To Exile And Venture A Path
Measure What I Treasure, I Head For Pressure And Wrath
Deed's Only Managed To Get Me Vanished And Chained
Judged In A Criminal's Sactum, I'm Averagin Pain
My Mind Peels As My Toughts Sprout At A Higher Rate
I'm Lookin For A Guidin Hand Like A Being At A Minor Age
Seachin In Every Buildin So I Don't Get Killed In This Journey
I Dropped My Shallow Mind Into Hell Consequently, Too Early
That It Is Surely, Or Am I Not Worthy Of A Spot In Heaven
Sit In A Golden Chizzled Chair Next To My Church's Reverand
For I Fail To Seize What Impaled My Seed To Shear Evil
Dragged To The Depths Of The Crater To Fear That Mear Lethal
And Torturing Demon, Am I Dreamin Or Is This A Simple Illusion
Souls Clashin, Road Crashin Into A Barren Wasteland Of Internal Brusing

Under The Casted Shadows Given From My Sins
I Depart To Another Dimension Were I Come To Begin
A New Chapter In Life, A New Written Story About Me
So I'm Waitin For A Guiding Hand To Route Me

Soul Scattered So I'm Unable To Find This Puzzle's Meaning
I Hustle, Scheaming For A Crack In This Struggle, Screaming
For I Open The Double Doors And Dust Particles Fill The Entrance
Creekin Sound Pounding My Ears, I Can Sense The Devil's Presence
Tremble As His Essence Is Ingulgin The Room With A Vast Impact
Bones Crack, Throat Snaps, Hands Wither As My Wrist's Crack
While My Souls Being Devoured By The Mear Stare In His Vision
Traveled Through My After Life To Discover My Secret Mission
I Fed Ambitions And Nurtured Theft, But Hoped To Earn Respect
To Realize I Ain't Worth A Spek Til I Visualize, I'm Burned And Wrecked
But Threw The Prayers I Chanted, Fool...Took My Savior For Granted
So I'm Senteced To Judgement, But Came To This Crater And Paniced
So I'm Peeled Cell, By Cell, While I'm Rubbed Into Particles
For My Spark Becomes Another Failure In The Newspapers' Articles
So While I Gasp For Air And Shed A Final Tear Of Painful Recognition
I Looked At The World And Hope They Realized What The Core Was Missin
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Old 03-24-06, 11:19 AM   #2
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Old 03-24-06, 11:56 AM   #3
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I'ma feed on this when I get back from the store.
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Old 03-27-06, 10:12 AM   #4
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well feed on it now hoe! and if you blocked me on aim, unblovk me........
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Old 03-27-06, 10:13 AM   #5
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you not blocked, and I'm still at the store, I can't decide if I want chex party mix or traditional.
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Old 03-28-06, 04:59 PM   #6
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I gotta show this some love its a real nice piece i can visualize what you sayin you set a dark mood and kept it flowin the flow was nice nice vocab good structure on point with everything i give this a 8.5/10


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Old 03-29-06, 12:04 AM   #7
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party mix hoe!!!! thanks for the feedback now feed deph................
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Old 03-29-06, 01:41 AM   #9
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Thanks for the feedback rey...............
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