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Old 04-15-06, 03:07 PM   #1
David Lama
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Christian Rap? How you gon consider that//
You probably ain't a real M.C. plz don't consider rap//
ehhhh too simple man

But consider this, son my flows are limitless//
and since you so close to god...damn man invison this//
ehhh

At the last meal Jesus wasn't there sippin cris//
or on stage bustin rhymes screaming "I gets mines!"//
ehhhh too weak man

Please take time to stop the epidmic//
that's right i said it....Phrophecy is back and more prophectic//
naaa lack creativity

Your pathetic...Holy Hustla Records huh//
fubbaucubba uh...if you ain't got it yet.. nigga i'll murder ya//
naaa filler. and weak

You're muthafuccin rediculous//
Exit stage left like Snagglepuss...cuz ya scared ta fuccin read this//
ehhh

Step to my block nigga i'll smack ya ass past Africa//
You'll come back lookin like Mike Tyson was jabbin ya//
naaa man. come on wheres the creativty?

I'm surprised that Christ himself hasn't upon you cast death//
and they way i'd conquer what's left...I'm like a fuccin Aztec//
not bad

Lil pussy i pray that you respond back//
How are you even black?//
You got ripped by M.C. Firetruck...Explain that?// (No diss to firetruck)
lmao. funny

Can't even except a fuccin battle invite//
you the target insight//
YO ASS BOUTZ TA DIE TONIGHT!!!!!//
naaaa

overall - not a good diss. alot of weak disses and just lacked creativity as a whole. try being more witty man. just think your lines out more.
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