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Old 04-21-06, 04:18 AM   #1
David Lama
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Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!
Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'

vs.

Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
That's right yo, and ya know his text's lame ofcourse
.........When even the wordplay in his name is forced

overall - cool battle. JTR came out swinging though, that sex life line was played as hell though.. lol.. but yea JTR had more quotables and just had the better overall verse. so yeaaaaaaaaaaaaa

vote - JTR
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Old 04-22-06, 04:48 PM   #2
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I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life
Creep's seeing stars, you WON'T elevate, just give it a test
Cuz Kemp thinks you should give it a few months
but LBL thinks you should just GIVE IT A REST

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Jack, your skill doesnt reach my dimention, but my flow's played?
you know your close to death..
....................even your sig shows a picture of your own grave!
Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'


eh, think write came pretty decent, in the begging. but fell off. but my vote goes to JTR, althought i hated his opener.

v/JTR
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Old 04-23-06, 12:57 AM   #3
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Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
That's right yo, and ya know his text's lame ofcourse
.........When even the wordplay in his name is forced


vs.

Think ya flow is just mean? Please, ya not even noticed, just leave
when I'm done, I'll be 'known to get rid of Rip' like 'sewing machines'


Vote JTR for wat more quotables.....but dope battle
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Old 04-23-06, 08:12 AM   #4
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Write will win this battle? Doubtly, but wait, he might yo
Cuz W.Rite is pretty good
...unfortunatly for you, that aint a typo
Nowadays cats drop old & played, tryna keep it tight yo
But your style is so new b
...unfortunatly for you, that WAS a typo
I shame dorks, so you know ya gonna be wrecked, right?
You'll go down on only 14 or less, kinda like ya sex life

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only time 'Jack stands out above the rest'..
......................is when 'watching that movie with Robin Williams'

cause when it comes to text, 'Jack is not took serious'..
.................................like 'theives who dont know how to steal'


pretty weak battle, although i liked those typo lines from JTR... i thought they were amusing and a good way to start the match. JTR came weak, but did enough to win because the other dude was just wack in my opinion... in need of elevation.

V/ - JTR
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Old 04-23-06, 09:40 AM   #5
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Neither vote, both lose.

JTR loses (2-1)
Danjure S. Writer loses (2-1)
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