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Old 04-22-06, 02:25 PM   #1
jr freeze
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tear out ya adams apple, dip it in caramel..and beat it in ya throat..
...i get rough, but closest he got to Mean was Median and Mode..
how dare you try text you foo, fuck ya crew ill have um die next to u..
...pre Lives By the sword, only thing kontro Lives Bi is sexual...
treat kon as a Know it all corpse, and have him Right n the dirt..
...i set up shop, only thing he set up is...all night, typin a verse..

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..Put the slugs to your lips, and leave you with a shell mouth..
ya moms a slut, when she went into labour, you prolly fell out..


V/Precize he had more quotables and a more consistent verse
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Old 04-22-06, 02:55 PM   #2
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Kontroverzy, you had some nice lines...some were decent but not really dope...
But I kinda missed the humor here and the real hard punches....I think you could've done better...

Precize, a nice verse...some lines did make me laugh and you dropped more consistent...
But I think a verse should do without hints or footnotes...so next time leave them out of your verse...

Precize had humor in his lines and was more consistent
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