20 lines mate ?

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Yeah, that's fine.

Vegetables are good for me so I can slap you B,
I eat swede for strength...u just ate one for captaincy,
Ya dress sense is good for publicity but thats the only thing,
Shirts goin left n right...but u won't get put on either wing,
Your beard is like a preteen, thats not a mean feat,
Cos you've got mutton chops a starving man wouldn't eat,
D & D are alike in ways, as both are getting chewed up,
And DB's pose is like Daub's homelife...screwed up,
I'm wanted in the world of Football, u can't step to me,
My stock rocketed sky high...u just do that with ur penalties,
The name is Wayne Rooney and Dave, you're done,
I can Cruise through this match without the help of ur son,
Yes, I'm gonna win this thing without votes being divided,
Cos ya earring positioning is like this battle...one sided,
Fuckin dude up, no homo, cos I'm coming full throttle,
I'll down Becks...then smash him over the head with the bottle,
Speak to you in first person, I'll fuckin do it then,
Now I can say Man U whack even though I play for them,
You haven't got the skill of me that oozes from my pen,
I'd usually make u Loos...but u might end up fucking her again.

il hit ya, that picture's your downfall and its sickn'in
and also proves leather ones aint the only balls your hittin
il fight ya, call yaself a striker..you need to stop mayne
cause you cant shoot for shit......you aint john, wayne
look at your head, its no wonder im hittin you
whilest thats ^ just what that other fag is giving you
and my spittins true, fuckin animal will be rattled next
but how can i call you donkey when you got me battling shrek
vodafone logo looks like a tear drop, but fuck you faggot
il be droppin tears...if you change your name to tears that is
you fat prick,this ugly cunt aint even fair fine
but waynes the big W?
..only cause when flipped it resembles his hair line
see son, your a shit kid and now youve been done
fuck the nike tick, you need a check up on your teeth son
you can take free kicks, its whatever your still fake kid
matta of fact,
you can take free kicks...in the side of your face bitch

listen to the wise man^..cause for you, many aint plenty
cause you got the strenth of 10 men, but the belly of twenty
im a legend of football so il just be shreddin on wayne
his thighs are so fat...his lap dances WITHOUT gettin paid

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Daubs MySpace

cool.

Votes.............?

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Daubs MySpace

Kempo MRK

Vegetables are good for me so I can slap you B,
I eat swede for strength...u just ate one for captaincy
Your beard is like a preteen, thats not a mean feat,
Cos you've got mutton chops a starving man wouldn't eat,
I'm wanted in the world of Football, u can't step to me,
My stock rocketed sky high...u just do that with ur penalties,
Fuckin dude up, no homo, cos I'm coming full throttle,
I'll down Becks...then smash him over the head with the bottle,
Speak to you in first person, I'll fuckin do it then,
Now I can say Man U whack even though I play for them,

Daubs


look at your head, its no wonder im hittin you
whilest thats ^ just what that other fag is giving you
you fat prick,this ugly cunt aint even fair fine
but waynes the big W?
..only cause when flipped it resembles his hair line
see son, your a shit kid and now youve been done
fuck the nike tick, you need a check up on your teeth son
im a legend of football so il just be shreddin on wayne
his thighs are so fat...his lap dances WITHOUT gettin paid

Ok overall this is a really hard battle to vote on. I tried breaking it down but it was too even to call so I'm gonna break it down this way. But congrats guys, this was a dope battle. Celeb pic battles are really easy to battle to but you still a really good job. Good job guys.

Kempo MRK: You really impressed me with your verse. I mean your wording was generally good and the wit was all there and you utelized personals really well. The Mutton chops was arguably the best line of the battle. It was dope as fuck and had me laughing like a hyena on morphene lol. The Swede line was nice too, but maybe could have been worded better. It was still solid though. The Rebecca Loos line was really creative but not harsh as she IS fit as fuck and any man would shag her silly. The Becks and Sky Rocket lines were both nice and the cruise line was solid. I liked the Man U wack line, lol it was a bit obvious but you flipped it really well. I didn't like the daubs screwed up and one sided lines but apart from that your verse was really consistent.

Daubs: You came really nice too man. One of the best I've seen you drop. The only problem is, is that you didn't come as consistent as Kempo. In the middle of your verse you had some weak lines or poorly worded potential good concepts. But your quotables were really nice. Your last two bars were dope as fuck, and the only reason I didn't quote the belly of twenty line was because... well Wayne Rooney is one of the best young players in the world and isn't that fat lol. If it was against Past Tense or someone it would have been dope as hell. The hairline and nike check were really nice, and the head line was flipped really well. If you came just a little more consistent I'd have given you this. The only one I really didn't like at all was the tears line. The free kicks line was too obvious and the shrek line could have been worded a lot. But fair play to you, you made a really good go at this.

Overall: Based on consistency I have to give this to Kempo, but it was a very nice battle and you both pleasantly suprised me. Good job guys.

V/ KempoMRK

Cool, thanks on the decent feedback, appreciate it.

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Daubs MySpace

Vegetables are good for me so I can slap you B,
I eat swede for strength...u just ate one for captaincy,
Your beard is like a preteen, thats not a mean feat,
Cos you've got mutton chops a starving man wouldn't eat,
I'm wanted in the world of Football, u can't step to me,
My stock rocketed sky high...u just do that with ur penalties,
Fuckin dude up, no homo, cos I'm coming full throttle,
I'll down Becks...then smash him over the head with the bottle,
Speak to you in first person, I'll fuckin do it then,
Now I can say Man U whack even though I play for them,
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vs.

il fight ya, call yaself a striker..you need to stop mayne
cause you cant shoot for shit......you aint john, wayne
look at your head, its no wonder im hittin you
whilest thats ^ just what that other fag is giving you
vodafone logo looks like a tear drop, but fuck you faggot
il be droppin tears...if you change your name to tears that is
you fat prick,this ugly cunt aint even fair fine
but waynes the big W?
..only cause when flipped it resembles his hair line
you can take free kicks, its whatever your still fake kid
matta of fact,
you can take free kicks...in the side of your face bitch
im a legend of football so il just be shreddin on wayne
his thighs are so fat...his lap dances WITHOUT gettin paid
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I got Daubs winning this with one more quotable. This shit was close as hell though, I wasn't expecting Kemp to come as good as he did, pretty much cuz i've never seen him battle before, but you guys both dropped hot. Like I said, shit was all even, but I got Daubs with one more quotable.

v/Daubs

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lmao wtf

I know nothing about soccer

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Check it.

Daubs was quite consistent, he had some nice plays using that shit about Wayne Rooney. However I don't think he used the concepts to their full potential and a lot of the lines fell short of what they could have been. Kemp started strong and stayed that way throughout. He literally had me laughing my ass off to most of the verse, it was real amusing. The personals were real affective and just hit stronger than Daubs did with his verse. Although, I felt that Daubs used the picture of Rooney better than Kemp used the Beckham picture. But, he still made it up with a lot of strong and amusing bars. So, I have him taking this battle.

V/ - KEMPOMRK


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But wait, the referee is here to join in...
....Kemp, be cool and don't delete this post. WORD.

The ref is in, and David.. I’ll be running rampant
Yeah, I’m calling for a drop ball, because I know yours haven’t
Hit you with a bo selecta… you can zip your mouth, bub
But David is most definitely #1…… in the Mickey Mouse Club
I’m splatterin’ you.. straight giving the beats to this dick
And then I’ll call a foul…… and then give you three kicks
Kid, Man U suck – but, don’t get me wrong
The team is aight, I just meant.. Why did they keep you so long?
Your skills are rotten, I’m ready to kill this lame
So I’ll just position him on the wing… of a FUCKING AREOPLANE

And Wayne’s a big-eared fuck, so watch me shoot this rabbit
Cuz his skill level is about as crooked – as his gambling habit
I see that picture with Ronaldo, it makes me gag and cough
But I see this guy is Man United… when some dudes blowin’ him off
You wack fuck, its no wonder I’m killin’ you fast
Ya see for once its Shrek, and not the donkey who’s the ASS
I’m riding to victory Wayne, you ain’t seen this skill for years
Fuck a bike though, I called handlebars… when I saw ure fuckin’ ears
Watch it though!! Wayne might steal a win… and I’ll tell you how sir
This kid is a FUCKING THIEF, but what do you expect…
…………from a FUCKING SCOUSER!!!!

WORD KIDS!!!


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But yeah, KempoMRK won this shit!!!

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Lol Cool.

1 - 2 .

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Daubs MySpace

D & D are alike in ways, as both are getting chewed up,
And DB's pose is like Daub's homelife...screwed up,
Speak to you in first person, I'll fuckin do it then,
Now I can say Man U whack even though I play for them,
You haven't got the skill of me that oozes from my pen,
I'd usually make u Loos...but u might end up fucking her again

vs.

il hit ya, that picture's your downfall and its sickn'in
and also proves leather ones aint the only balls your hittin
listen to the wise man^..cause for you, many aint plenty
cause you got the strenth of 10 men, but the belly of twenty
im a legend of football so il just be shreddin on wayne
his thighs are so fat...his lap dances WITHOUT gettin paid



Iono, i thought this battle wasn't good.

lots of played punches that weren't pulled off good.

v/daubs. thought he pulled it off a lil better.

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em ur mother is a crack whore kims a known slut so whats halie goin to be when she grews up?