Beat is whatever, kinda played out but all that really matters is your verse so...

Your delivery in terms of energy is good but with your way of spittin, it sounds kinda weird with your flow. It wasn't all super lyrical and I know you didn't mean for it to be. Some good multis and shit but it was just like, not standout, feel me? It was just kinda like "SPuL spit some quick bars over a old song, coo" type shit. I know your target audience would feel this but to me? Just average.

Keep it up though.

RTF yo.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...262#post2742262

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