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Old 05-20-06, 04:30 AM   #1
XpLiCiT187
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CONCEPT IS GENIUS, IT'S CREATIVE & UNIQUE...I DON'T KNOW WHY CATS IS SLEEPIN ON THIS THREAD. STORY LINE STAYED ON TRACK THE WHOLE TIME...

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theres no repenting plan, I’m deceiving humanity
play mind tricks on them till their reaching insanity
completing my fantasy.. as I make them say my name
for everything, “JESUS JESUS” while in their brains I reign

HOT, NICE TRANSITION INTO THE NEXT LINE....

THERE WAS A COUPLE CORNY LINES THROWN IN WHERE ITS CLEAR YOU WAS LOOKING FOR ANOTHER MULTI TO THROW IN SUCH AS...

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nevermind, I need to first know why this urge to write stuff?
don’t lie schmuck, remember I know everything. alright!! FUCK!!

BUT THEN AGAIN ITS EXCEPTABLE WHEN YOUR TACKLING A CHALLENGING SUBJECT & THE FLOW WAS AS LONG AS IT WAS, SO THERES GONNA BE A COUPLE THROWAWAY LINES ADDED IN TO SPACE THE VERSE OUT... DOPE SHIT THOUGH.
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Old 05-21-06, 02:55 AM   #2
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