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05-21-05, 11:04 AM | #1 | |||
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1st Open Mic Piece
IP: A181 D033
When i grab da mic i spit heartless...leavin niggas In da darkness,see my rivas thinkin "fuck dis", See dem run away like Nivea, they pacin,cos they Just realised da kinda nigga they facin,yo my Flow assimilates the full capacity of my mind, Meanin when i flow im spittin everythin from inside, 9 outta 10 cats talk out their ass-hole, And you think i'm gonna let dat bullshit pass? NO, Goin on like it ain't bout da rhyme, they just Want da money cos they wanna see the time, on da Most expensive Rolex they can, while Gettin blinded by da diamonds on their hand, Rich or not da way i see it dem cats is fake,cos you Know if you diss em on a track they would break,wid their Head in their hands, lookin to da sky, askin God why their career's bout to die, Only a handful of da best lyricists, Ever get da chance to make MTV appearances, While you got these second rate rap game stainers, On yo TV screen tryna sell you trainers... Last edited by Souljah : 05-22-05 at 06:13 PM. |
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05-22-05, 07:28 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: A181 D033
Yo people can y'all hit me wid a lil feedback please?
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05-23-05, 08:27 AM | #3 | |||
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IP: B784 423E
some feedback please............................................ ...............................................
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05-23-05, 09:25 AM | #4 | |||||||
==bLaCk-HanD==
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IP: C9A3 44E8
Aiyyo Diz Wuz Iight Sometimes It Was Hard 2 Find Da Rhymez But It Wuz A Good Read Pleaze Leave Feedback On My Freestyle In My Signature
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05-27-06, 11:13 AM | #5 | |||
OYD
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IP: 2B7A 2084
kid is garbage
pick up a mic |
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05-27-06, 01:27 PM | #6 | ||||
-da prophit-
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IP: CF86 0039
true to that... u got 2,826 and u never did Om. well thats sad. anyways didnt really like this. had no point. very lil emotion. but keep trying...
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05-28-06, 06:07 PM | #7 | |||||
~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
Most expensive Rolex they can, while
Gettin blinded by da diamonds on their hand, u from tha uk...but u rap like DipSet post that shit in the freestyle thread... om's should be a lil more complicated
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05-30-06, 03:17 PM | #8 | ||||
what dat be...
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IP: 5021 8C8D
ok kidd it was a little weak , u have to work on ur flow and rymes
on the plus u had good structure and ur stuff did ryme but was weak it was a okish peice i have seen better id give u a 5/10 |
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05-30-06, 03:19 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: EF7B 93C8
closed
read the rules
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