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Old 06-03-06, 08:04 AM   #16
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this was ok....real thuggish mayne nice but work on voacb thats all.
nice collaba nd nice verses though real decent.

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Old 06-03-06, 12:10 PM   #17
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Shut up and get that development crew going
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Old 06-03-06, 01:12 PM   #18
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This was cool collab ya'll both stayed on contend...overall i have to say it came together well
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Old 06-03-06, 01:43 PM   #19
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Thank you..........
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Old 06-03-06, 03:52 PM   #20
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hell yea me and t.g. brought that shit together nicely
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Old 06-03-06, 06:50 PM   #21
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this was nice..wit that hook it'd be a good audio..yall shud try this on audio..just work a lil bit on your wordplay n creativity..nice piece
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Old 06-03-06, 08:56 PM   #22
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Thanxx boss uppin
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Old 06-04-06, 05:26 PM   #23
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that was hot...hook was dope....

both verses were real good, good flow

good rhymes and overall this was tight
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Old 06-04-06, 06:35 PM   #24
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thanx kidd uppin
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Old 06-05-06, 04:55 PM   #25
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this was fire drop, was feelin the chorus and both verses, keep droppin, this was hot
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thanxx uppin.....
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uppin baby and can we get some comments from a few vets
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Old 06-06-06, 06:53 PM   #28
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yeah that wouldn't hurt uppin
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Old 06-07-06, 05:25 AM   #29
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Man...i love the hook, would be great on a audio if you could find the perfect beat and work it... Lyrics were Decent, No real Outshining on each other which is good, and really good balance between styles of how you two do it... Maybe work on a little creativity and wordplay, since this is a kinda thuggish ish, put some real kinda gangster wordplay to make it all the better lol..otherwise..nice flow..work it on audio..
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