Man...i love the hook, would be great on a audio if you could find the perfect beat and work it... Lyrics were Decent, No real Outshining on each other which is good, and really good balance between styles of how you two do it... Maybe work on a little creativity and wordplay, since this is a kinda thuggish ish, put some real kinda gangster wordplay to make it all the better lol..otherwise..nice flow..work it on audio..

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