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Old 06-13-06, 01:31 AM   #1
The Creator
I beat bitches up
 
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From: South Florida nugga'
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Im air born wit hits,ya face'll be blue and black
i aint need to confirm you landin punchs when i....roger wack
dont need hot shit to kill'em,he dissed who
Hes the new game,
i played roger more than those qoutes from papoose
The glocks really sick,he'll die off heat flashes
jus to be droppin RRRRRR witout pirate speech classes
the ruger like gettin sumthing,it gives burns his heart'll skip a beat
pussy caught sucha a yeast infection,
.................he explaned in the heat
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verse really fell off after dramatically wit maybe one or two good lines after this but they warent that good...but these lines to me were really good...should've quit on the nameplay after the 1st line but its still str8 man...

V.S.

Nothing

^
U kinda fed of his lines a bit in the beginning and that threw me off for the rest of the verse...(I opoligize for doing it in our battle a while ago)...I didn't like the flow or punches on this verse....u really didnt bring ur best on this one man....

V/ Jae.Brix
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