Pretty goode, pretty goode... I loved and enjoyed readin bothe peices.... Behaving was deep... after readin hers, I was like damn the comp gotta a lot to prove. But Alchemist came thru hard too. Miss B had great imagery, nice plot, and very reflective. Alch had complexed metaphors, and great use of verbage. Alchemist, kinda feel off at the end, while Miss B's stayed interesting all the way thru.... this coulda went either way, but overall I'mma have to say Miss B. winner- Miss Behaving

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