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Old 07-02-06, 08:07 AM   #1
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6. Shake-Zula (6-1) vs 7. Ace Heratoga (4-0)

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Old 07-02-06, 11:22 AM   #2
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Great...

Hello there Shake
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Old 07-02-06, 07:07 PM   #3
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whats up. match whoever drops first.

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=230928
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Old 07-05-06, 08:38 PM   #4
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20

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I know u're easy to beat. I'll never claim it's hard...
And u proved it when U dissed urself better than u dissed JTR
Threats comin' from a wack dork usually burns me...
Luckily, my temper aint as short as ya stay in the tag tourney
Fuck it, I'll lynch u...and watch u cry and scream...
Exposed, dangling from a rope...like Jet Li behind the scenes
Claim u're nice in text now, but I doubt it, punk...
I've got fresh concepts, a fresh style...u're just fresh out of luck
Think u'll surpass me? Nah, that can't happen...
Where were u last week? I only get robbed in champ matches
Girls only agree to go out with u if it's a blind date...
Otherwise, u get turned down quicker than ya tracks on myspace
Funny I mentioned it. I had to stop and laugh...
Because ya most impressive win was followed by a pop-up ad
U don't have a single banger. That shit is a trip...
Fuck'a middle finger. U only see the index...over the listener's lips
Ya picture had me all gloomy and sweatin'...
Seriously...If those are ur sisters, I need start usin' protection
If u really want a war, my right fist will deck u...
And leave Hera Toga on the floor, like this was Zeus' bedroom
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Old 07-06-06, 11:51 PM   #5
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sorry for the delay i just got home from work... I'm keying shit now
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Old 07-07-06, 12:48 AM   #6
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LoL u fuckin herb...
how the fuck you gonna clown MY picture?
Than bite ClasSick…


Quote:
Originally Posted by Classick in the LBL Cypher
im too smooth.
check my swagger.. lines flow, im patient holmes..
'n i aint seen people rockin 'toga style since Ancient Rome
my waist's stationed chrome, 'bout to pop loose
making Hera my bitch... like im the fucking God Zues



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Originally Posted by shake-zula
If u really want a war, my right fist will deck u...
And leave Hera Toga on the floor, like this was Zeus' bedroom




You can’t stack up, your antsized, this bastards mine…
If ya so ‘fresh’, how come you stay flippin ClasSick lines?

You key up verses… Ace’s lines speak in a sequence
If Shake Zulas a mic ruler, he textin under false pretense
4000 Plays, 850 Downloads, that’s more props than u ever got
But I guess its ok…
You make up for it with these 16 year old kids on ya jock…
Your a real news anchor...leave you chained on the sea floor
Asked Shake to spit hard, and he started smashin his keyboard



Using my pictures was a low blow, but hey that’s swell…
When yours look like a fuckin alien raped Dave Chapelle
He can't stand chicks that talk back, I can feel that shit
He got plenty to spare, no wonder he aint' want no lip...
Well jeez.. look an OG on a PC ... kick back, hand me a forty
It's easy to beat kids on the net, when you damn near forty
we both done our homework we even that’s fine jack..
So many whack gay jokes…
I heard Mario Cantone wants his fuckin lines back
Internet legend? Please this pussy is just pending elimination
Shake's blowing heat in battles... venting sexual frustration
I don't wanna start a fight with voters, but RV damn this place
I'd kick Shake in the balls... but i'd hit a few in the face



And no don't say I was feeding n shit... the first set of lines was written before you dropped...
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Old 07-07-06, 03:44 PM   #7
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I know u're easy to beat. I'll never claim it's hard...
And u proved it when U dissed urself better than u dissed JTR
-------haha

Threats comin' from a wack dork usually burns me...
Luckily, my temper aint as short as ya stay in the tag tourney
---------ok

Fuck it, I'll lynch u...and watch u cry and scream...
Exposed, dangling from a rope...like Jet Li behind the scenes
---------------eh

Claim u're nice in text now, but I doubt it, punk...
I've got fresh concepts, a fresh style...u're just fresh out of luck
-----------------eh

Think u'll surpass me? Nah, that can't happen...
Where were u last week? I only get robbed in champ matches
--------------------ok

Girls only agree to go out with u if it's a blind date...
Otherwise, u get turned down quicker than ya tracks on myspace
-------------------hahaha nice

Funny I mentioned it. I had to stop and laugh...
Because ya most impressive win was followed by a pop-up ad
----------------------hahahah lmao

U don't have a single banger. That shit is a trip...
Fuck'a middle finger. U only see the index...over the listener's lips
---------------------------huh?

Ya picture had me all gloomy and sweatin'...
Seriously...If those are ur sisters, I need start usin' protection
---------------------eh

If u really want a war, my right fist will deck u...
And leave Hera Toga on the floor, like this was Zeus' bedroom
-----------ok


heratoga


You can’t stack up, your antsized, this bastards mine…
If ya so ‘fresh’, how come you stay flippin ClasSick lines?
-----------ok

You key up verses… Ace’s lines speak in a sequence
If Shake Zulas a mic ruler, he textin under false pretense
-----------------eh..

4000 Plays, 850 Downloads, that’s more props than u ever got
But I guess its ok…
You make up for it with these 16 year old kids on ya jock…
---------heh.. not bad but it prolly 16 yr olds that play n download from myspace lol

Your a real news anchor...leave you chained on the sea floor
Asked Shake to spit hard, and he started smashin his keyboard
-----------------------heh.. decent punch but its weird for some reason.. pluss the set up is totally irrelevent


Using my pictures was a low blow, but hey that’s swell…
When yours look like a fuckin alien raped Dave Chapelle
-------------------eh

He can't stand chicks that talk back, I can feel that shit
He got plenty to spare, no wonder he aint' want no lip...
--------------------hahah nice

Well jeez.. look an OG on a PC ... kick back, hand me a forty
It's easy to beat kids on the net, when you damn near forty
------------eh.. too simple

we both done our homework we even that’s fine jack..
So many whack gay jokes…
I heard Mario Cantone wants his fuckin lines back
----------eh

Internet legend? Please this pussy is just pending elimination
Shake's blowing heat in battles... venting sexual frustration
---------------ok

I don't wanna start a fight with voters, but RV damn this place
I'd kick Shake in the balls... but i'd hit a few in the face
-------------------------hahah.. cool



pretty nice battle here.. bnoth had 4-5 good lines.. Ace may heven be more consistent but I''m just feelin shake's lines more

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Old 07-07-06, 04:14 PM   #8
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I know u're easy to beat. I'll never claim it's hard...
And u proved it when U dissed urself better than u dissed JTR
Threats comin' from a wack dork usually burns me...
Luckily, my temper aint as short as ya stay in the tag tourney
Fuck it, I'll lynch u...and watch u cry and scream...
Exposed, dangling from a rope...like Jet Li behind the scenes
Claim u're nice in text now, but I doubt it, punk...
I've got fresh concepts, a fresh style...u're just fresh out of luck
U don't have a single banger. That shit is a trip...
Fuck'a middle finger. U only see the index...over the listener's lips
Ya picture had me all gloomy and sweatin'...
Seriously...If those are ur sisters, I need start usin' protection


vs

we both done our homework we even that’s fine jack..
So many whack gay jokes…
I heard Mario Cantone wants his fuckin lines back
I don't wanna start a fight with voters, but RV damn this place
I'd kick Shake in the balls... but i'd hit a few in the face

this battle was kinda close...but it came down 2 better wordplay
and better worded punches

v/Shake
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Old 07-07-06, 04:39 PM   #9
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I know u're easy to beat. I'll never claim it's hard...
And u proved it when U dissed urself better than u dissed JTR
Threats comin' from a wack dork usually burns me...
Luckily, my temper aint as short as ya stay in the tag tourney
Think u'll surpass me? Nah, that can't happen...
Where were u last week? I only get robbed in champ matches
NAH HOMIE YOU JUST DROPPED WACKER THAN ME
Funny I mentioned it. I had to stop and laugh...
Because ya most impressive win was followed by a pop-up ad


VS



Using my pictures was a low blow, but hey that’s swell…
When yours look like a fuckin alien raped Dave Chapelle
He can't stand chicks that talk back, I can feel that shit
He got plenty to spare, no wonder he aint' want no lip...
Well jeez.. look an OG on a PC ... kick back, hand me a forty
It's easy to beat kids on the net, when you damn near forty


GOOD BATTLE
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Old 07-07-06, 07:06 PM   #10
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shake won this by a mile, lol @ turned down line
nie try Ace thou, i mean he didnt win by a mile but he won.

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Old 07-08-06, 12:47 AM   #11
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goood looks on the votes ya'll

sorry for the rushed verse shake... shit happens... good battle homie
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Old 07-08-06, 08:11 AM   #12
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nothing

vs.

You can’t stack up, your antsized, this bastards mine…
If ya so ‘fresh’, how come you stay flippin ClasSick lines?


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Old 07-08-06, 01:35 PM   #13
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^lol


Vote - Shake.

It was obvious. Better punches, better flow, better verse.
Besides that tag tourney line killed it. Good battle though.
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Old 07-08-06, 03:10 PM   #14
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Threats comin' from a wack dork usually burns me...
Luckily, my temper aint as short as ya stay in the tag tourney
Funny I mentioned it. I had to stop and laugh...
Because ya most impressive win was followed by a pop-up ad

Vs.

You can’t stack up, your antsized, this bastards mine…
If ya so ‘fresh’, how come you stay flippin ClasSick lines?

Pretty good battle, Shake was consistent and had other decent lines too...Ace, you had some good concepts in your verse but just did not word them well enough, could have been a much better verse

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Old 07-08-06, 03:15 PM   #15
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Yeah, this was a good battle. Both had some funny lines. I'm vote'n Shake though based on his consistancy. He had less bland lines than Ace. But I don't think this battle was onesided. It ended up being sorta close IMO, but the votes won't show that. ANyway, vote Shake.
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