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Old 07-02-06, 08:05 AM   #1
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18. pictureperfect2 (3-3) vs 19. da sein (2-1)

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Old 07-02-06, 09:14 PM   #2
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wazza

10-12 ort so?


whats ur home site anyways?

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Old 07-03-06, 05:15 AM   #3
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Old 07-06-06, 02:55 PM   #4
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aight dunny...10 g/l


Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good
Wins? I doubt you’ll bank…I spit lead like Howitzer tanks
So like a military hooker…Imma blow you out the ranks
See clone, you can’t take the pressure this G hones
You’ll take a loss…
…Cuz the steaks are too high like flying T-Bones
You’re not winning P…your record will reflect your misery
When I sweep the votes and skew picture’s perfect symmetry




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Old 07-06-06, 08:02 PM   #5
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i dont need help from the WB or katie holmes this week
cuz im at da sien's door step ready to knock'em into his creek
imma kill this coffee shop rapper... u not gettin smoked is a big hoax
the way i put this bitch in check there's no need to edit in any votes
boys always rape'n this kid.. he wont' have time to phase me
yeah, fags be in sein so much i thought every homo was crazy
ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte
this virgin can bet on him winnin.. ya, the nerd can bet the farm
cuz the only time this kids in a hole's when his bookies breakin his arm
..

woof?
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Old 07-06-06, 10:11 PM   #6
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You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good

vs.

ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte

Close battle, here not much impressed me...I like picture's line, but Sein just had a personal that hit hard...And he came creative...Picture try to shorten you lines or well do internal rhymes if your gonna stretch them...helps it flow...But for consistentcy I goota go with Da Sein.

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Old 07-06-06, 10:23 PM   #7
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Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
decent...
See clone, you can’t take the pressure this G hones
You’ll take a loss…
…Cuz the steaks are too high like flying T-Bones
wasnt really a punch towards him or noting but i was still feeling the line thou...


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imma kill this coffee shop rapper... u not gettin smoked is a big hoax
the way i put this bitch in check there's no need to edit in any votes
feeling it....
ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte
nice
this virgin can bet on him winnin.. ya, the nerd can bet the farm
cuz the only time this kids in a hole's when his bookies breakin his arm
aight ending

idk what woof means either....

vote: P.P for more qouteables and harder hits...
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Old 07-07-06, 03:52 PM   #8
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Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
--------ok

You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good
---------hahaha dope

Wins? I doubt you’ll bank…I spit lead like Howitzer tanks
So like a military hooker…Imma blow you out the ranks
-------------------lol aight

See clone, you can’t take the pressure this G hones
You’ll take a loss…
…Cuz the steaks are too high like flying T-Bones
--------------lmao naw.. this is just too stupid

You’re not winning P…your record will reflect your misery
When I sweep the votes and skew picture’s perfect symmetry
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i dont need help from the WB or katie holmes this week
cuz im at da sien's door step ready to knock'em into his creek
-----------------heh.. its creative but its really a stretch

imma kill this coffee shop rapper... u not gettin smoked is a big hoax
the way i put this bitch in check there's no need to edit in any votes
-----------------------eh

boys always rape'n this kid.. he wont' have time to phase me
yeah, fags be in sein so much i thought every homo was crazy
------------------hahah nice

ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte
---------------------------ok

this virgin can bet on him winnin.. ya, the nerd can bet the farm
cuz the only time this kids in a hole's when his bookies breakin his arm
-------cool concept but i'm not feelin the owrding


close as fuck.. pic would definitly have won this with better wording
he had better concepts.. but my fav lin of the battle was simple, just worded well

Da sein's ANYONE line...

i read this battle now 3-4 times n i would vote tie but thats just gay

vote = Da Sein by a fuckin hair
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Old 07-07-06, 04:11 PM   #9
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Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good
You’re not winning P…your record will reflect your misery
When I sweep the votes and skew picture’s perfect symmetry

vs


imma kill this coffee shop rapper... u not gettin smoked is a big hoax
the way i put this bitch in check there's no need to edit in any votes
boys always rape'n this kid.. he wont' have time to phase me
yeah, fags be in sein so much i thought every homo was crazy
ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte
this virgin can bet on him winnin.. ya, the nerd can bet the farm
cuz the only time this kids in a hole's when his bookies breakin his arm

This was a nice battle...it came down 2 me reading it twice

and my decision for overall better punches..and better wordplay

v/Pp2
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Old 07-07-06, 04:43 PM   #10
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You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good


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imma kill this coffee shop rapper... u not gettin smoked is a big hoax
the way i put this bitch in check there's no need to edit in any votes
feeling it....
ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte

V/PP2 TOOK THIS HE WAS JUST OVERALL MOER CONSISTENT
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Old 07-07-06, 06:16 PM   #11
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word, by the looks of yesterday i wasn't expectin this many votes in total... thanx, much appriciated
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Old 07-07-06, 06:20 PM   #12
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You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good
Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
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ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte

V/da sein this was a decent one...pp2 came wit acouple of decent lines but da sein had a better over all verse more consistent and more quotables...
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Old 07-08-06, 08:19 AM   #13
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Peep my rep and the predictions…you just can’t take me man
So I’ll fuck up picture worse than a painter with shaky hands
You’ve got a few losses…hell, everyone should
Mine’s from a not voting…
…while yours are from facing ANYONE good
Wins? I doubt you’ll bank…I spit lead like Howitzer tanks
So like a military hooker…Imma blow you out the ranks

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ya skills is wack... my punches keep u from another birth day
good thing u aint gotta grow past 39 to know raps not ya forte

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Old 07-08-06, 01:18 PM   #14
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vote - sein.

I wasn't really feeling pp2, nothing was really hard hittin' in my eyes. da sein had that anyone good line, and the shaky hands which in my eyes killed pp whole verse. Overall though this was a pretty decent battle. Da sein just had the better verse.
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Old 07-08-06, 03:28 PM   #15
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This was an alright battle. I got Sein taking it on more consistancy. He had one more line that I liked. PP's verse was alright, I think the forte line was kind of a stretch, but could've been dope if worded a little better. Anyway, yeah, I got Sein.
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