i'm in 10 coo...

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14 prick...

you're nothing compared to me fuck, even on my worst day
shitty with directions 'huh...
...c'ing that your means of spitting is the worst way
i know you're intimidated by me, so get lost loser
i'll commercial this dude wackness...
...& watch Slicknives get airplay on nic jr.
a fake pimp whose persona rocks jewels that's not bling
i'll eat your crown of cubic...
...& taste the rainbow like skittles was reign'ing
i don't really think you want it , but you're stuck with it
a recipe of success by you, fucks up when it hits the Skill-it
dem d-boys cook dope, don't you smell my flesh burn?
i ate ya...
...but i'm still bloody hungry like a cannibal that's an england bum
'down n out'-i got you sag'in-slumped like fish bait
i dish fakes...
...as this shot trey'em & batter your fate
fuck boi, i'm a image of your dreams-your blanks shoots for 'em
you make it seems hard...
...that's why it's no shortages of fags in this forum

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How the fuck did your ranking get so high?



oh no, Im battling a whack fat homo – dont even lie you like men...
& your bars are so stretched they just bent, out of shape...like the guy who writes them
your such an ugly twat, talking about lines in a bar is fucking whack...
but you got 3-deey...& Im still struggling to find a dimension to ‘em worth looking at
shit, Im not quite sure whose feeling more ashamed now though, yo...
I mean im battling you, but it must be bad knowing all your wins came from no-shows
fuck it, this battle is shaping up nicely - all you can do is stare son
‘cause Im firing on all cylinders...and sending you back to square one
your a fucking joke, hated – RV would point a gun at you first
‘cause you aint important bitch…but its true that foremost of us your one of the worst
think what you want, you wont get past me...theres a soldier ahead
your just a stones throw away...so I’ll Israel your ass & throw a boulder instead
& now when you sign out you might just be remembered son...
your an artist!...but only ‘cause your lines are drawn-out enough to resemble one!!!

Vote on this shit

word

a fake pimp whose persona rocks jewels that's not bling
i'll eat your crown of cubic...
...& taste the rainbow like skittles was reign'ing

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your such an ugly twat, talking about lines in a bar is fucking whack...
but you got 3-deey...& Im still struggling to find a dimension to ‘em worth looking at
fuck it, this battle is shaping up nicely - all you can do is stare son
‘cause Im firing on all cylinders...and sending you back to square one
your a fucking joke, hated – RV would point a gun at you first
‘cause you aint important bitch…but its true that foremost of us your one of the worst
& now when you sign out you might just be remembered son...
your an artist!...but only ‘cause your lines are drawn-out enough to resemble one!!!


Right, for me this battle was fucking one-sided to fuck. I wasn't feeling nothing from Nasdeey except that skittles bar... that was pretty cool. Anyway, the rest of your verse just lacked in the wording, you had a couple of nice concepts but the wording was completely fucked. Anyway, I was liking SlicKnife's verse... pretty much every line made me laugh and I could've easily quoted his entire verse. I just felt that the bars I didn't quote were just a fraction away from being fire punches.

Overall, SlicKnife takes this battle easily in my opinion.

V/ - SlicKnife

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i know you're intimidated by me, so get lost loser
i'll commercial this dude wackness...
...& watch Slicknives get airplay on nic jr.
a fake pimp whose persona rocks jewels that's not bling
i'll eat your crown of cubic...
...& taste the rainbow like skittles was reign'ing

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your such an ugly twat, talking about lines in a bar is fucking whack...
but you got 3-deey...& Im still struggling to find a dimension to ‘em worth looking at
your a fucking joke, hated – RV would point a gun at you first
‘cause you aint important bitch…but its true that foremost of us your one of the worst
& now when you sign out you might just be remembered son...
your an artist!...but only ‘cause your lines are drawn-out enough to resemble one!!!

Nasdeey, two lines I quoted were kinda funny, but the rest was really inconsistent and too basic. Slic, 3d line was my fave of the battle, that was really nice. Artist line hit cuz it was true about him. The rest was much more consistent than Nasdeey's verse so ya got this.

Vote - Slic

a fake pimp whose persona rocks jewels that's not bling
i'll eat your crown of cubic...
...& taste the rainbow like skittles was reign'ing

VS.

your such an ugly twat, talking about lines in a bar is fucking whack...
but you got 3-deey...& Im still struggling to find a dimension to ‘em worth looking at
fuck it, this battle is shaping up nicely - all you can do is stare son
‘cause Im firing on all cylinders...and sending you back to square one
your a fucking joke, hated – RV would point a gun at you first
‘cause you aint important bitch…but its true that foremost of us your one of the worst
& now when you sign out you might just be remembered son...
your an artist!...but only ‘cause your lines are drawn-out enough to resemble one!!!


this was really one sided to me but good battle fellas....

plez RTF of a vote in my battle an plez brake it down.......

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Cool...

3-0 to me

Vote on this shit

nothing.

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& now when you sign out you might just be remembered son...
your an artist!...but only ‘cause your lines are drawn-out enough to resemble one!!!


vote - Slick.

whack battle too me, slick has the most streched lines ever, nasdeey can't drop a decent punch and both of your structures suck. but overall slick takes this for having a couple of decent punches.

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