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07-25-06, 05:39 AM
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Angel - cho, tony n me
IP: A68E 9D69
jus suntin....nothin major.....yea i know about the mixing problem after tony ima fix it but im too lazy at the moment till then yep this is it.....
1st - cho hook - me 2nd - tony hook - me 3rd - me hook - me ANGEL - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4230173 links - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2803194 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232318
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07-25-06, 05:42 AM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
Listenin now
1rst-Love the lyrics and multies flow is good....rides the beat well...good emotion and delivery HOok is good sounds like this dude i know named Joe Cosimo 2nd-Flow is good and voice is good quality is kina off i like the effects tho!was good 3rd-I like the flow and the quality is cool....the lyrics is nice...and the pressense and delivery was killlin it...i really like this...it was good this was a good track i was feelin the 3rd person the most i felt they fit the beat the most |
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07-25-06, 05:47 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
gracias amigo....................
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-25-06, 06:19 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: C73B 2C66
listening...
intros ok...1st verse nice kick in...flows cool Cho...delivery soundin a lil rushed in places but lyrics cool...over dubs slightly off in places too beats ok sounds weird but in a good way hook - hooks ok...nice flow 2nd verse - TonySelf...vocals are too low...flows good...lyrics str8...as per usual...but them vocals need raising a few DB's... hook cut in weird then lol 3rd - i like ya voice man sounds good...but flow is cool delivery nice volume on vocals cool...best quality out of the 3...i think you perhaps did best on this verse... all in all nice track...i'll hit back wit an RTF  keep droppin
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07-25-06, 06:25 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: C73B 2C66
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07-25-06, 10:42 AM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
thx yo...ill rtf in a bit
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07-25-06, 04:16 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
word up thanks...i get back to you sooner or later
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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07-25-06, 04:31 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2A9D B363
1st MC - flow and all that is on point......quality is crispy.....delivery is coo makes ya lyrics really come out.....
Hook - popped out didn't blend well wit da song.....otha than that fits da concept gets yall point across 2nd MC - flow is strate...i dunno could be my sound system but ya could turn up ya vocals a tad bit...but delivery and all that is strate..... Hook - same as above 3rd MC - flow is okay....feelin ya delivery Jay........lyrics are fine.....ya quality blended better in ur verse than ur hook did...... Overall - strate track, nice concept.....keep droppen........ pz ~1~ RTF please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232335
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07-25-06, 05:40 PM
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Zar Bi-Shup
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IP: 4312 793E
Too lazy to type out a whole review @ the moment. Maybe later tonight.
All I gotta say is Cho fucking ripped this. Cho pwnz b3atz. [/nerd]
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07-25-06, 08:28 PM
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IP: DA0A 5A03
nice job on this except the hook is a lil loud and comes in weird
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07-25-06, 08:35 PM
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I'm Talented.Period.
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IP: 2B7A 2084
O...yea, I heard this
lol Cho...already gave you my feed on this...lyrics are intense and real because they are personal One way to improve your verse is to ad lib it better...a few well timed/placed ad libs would make your verse pop some nice tho Jay... vocal quality sounded a touch compressed flow is nice...rhyming is good...however, compared to Cho's lyrics, yours seemed inconsequential. Good tho 1 |
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07-25-06, 10:39 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: C527 8B3F
no doubt......thx ppl
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07-26-06, 04:09 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4B42 F7C5
Listen'n
like the beat....sounds like bircs picked it....lol 1st: Bircs nice presence lyrics dope...some parts was rushed ur dubs coulda be done smootha but its raw material son...feel me....over-all good shit... Hook: Feelin this shit rockin a beedie right now...shit is proper...i like the way u came off on it....good lyrical concept... 2nd: Tony feelin the flow vocals could be turned up...dubs over-ride to much turn those down a lil bit... lyrics dope.....real calm an smooth....like the way u approached... it Hook: same as last 3rd: Jay u did your thing son....shit was proper...lryics dope...your vocals sounded pressed....but that can be changed...once u mix it properly i want to hear it again.... my rating 7.5/10 good shit fellaz keep doin' what y'all do...100 |
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07-26-06, 09:24 PM
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IP: DA0A 5A03
thx..............
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07-27-06, 02:01 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: A68E 9D69
to the toppppp...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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