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Old 08-06-06, 10:15 AM   #1
J. Luth
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Dudes lonely… LBL aint won you fans; Da Trus is your fucked and scared
You missed out on your ONLY groupie when ^^ didn’t put you there…
ehh decent attempt at wordplay here. decent line
Dawg you aint here to stay, LG’ll have you on your way
Cuz the voters’ll rate the punches… and give kempoMRK
ehh the wordplay was weak... didn't work

Let's talk songs, I rape tracks, 'n I ain't into emo shit about stalkin
Cos Panic At The Disco to me, is just your house party when I walk in
decent. not bad
I leave many balking, 'n yeah you've won some, but pleaase bitch
Cos if you're classified dope, it's just cos no one ever gets to see it
no, this was wack. no hate truth lol

overall weak battle. LG tried some concepts and wordplay and shit, but iunno shit just didn't execute well enough and second punch I didn't like. Kempo had a decent first line, and second line was bad. so overall kempo gets vote for having one decent line.

v/Kempo
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