naw not that good need vocab to help shorten too man miscelaneous words which interferses with the flow however i liked this part and it flows real well use this as an example of where you wanna go

life is like half of these whores cause life does suck,
all i want from life is respect and a bitch to fuck,
i want my pockets to be rich with bucks

the bar after this was way to long and screwed up the flow terrible home but i love thes three and way they flowed