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Old 08-11-06, 11:50 PM   #1
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Untold took this, MiSk two bars were too basic, the Amish line?Nah, prehaps if you worded it differently it would of been different. The underdog wordplay is played, but you didn't try to flip it at all. Untold first was abit unco for me, shoulda used something else instead of lackluster for the punch to make sense. 2nd bar was aight,was the deciding factor though.
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