I agree wit alot of people, that like ya just put 2 words together and had the second word rhyme wit tha othas. Way to simple. It also didn't make sense at all too. But again I agree wit tha otha dude who said it, that if ya aint gon' write somethin serious or at ya best ability why write? It just a waste of time. But whateva. I can't really say on ya style cause apparently this aint really ya work but on this piece I give .5/10. I only gave the .5 cause the words rhymed, I mean I read otha people's work and it really didn't even rhyme but...w/e.

It'z J <3