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Old 08-12-06, 11:55 PM   #1
Yung Impression
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they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
then i found out he's bi.. bentover takin it from a damn dood
Slick back aint a hairstyle, its wher he's preppin for his mans splooge

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your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too
no joke, so know that my punches will amount to hell, ugly...
n youll be in such a state...the Palestinians will count themselves lucky
but...I wont doubt the fact you worked hard becoming a star...
I know youve gone to great lengths...all I had to do was read one of your bars!


this was a close battle, and both had the same amount of quotables, but Butler edged this one out, cuz his lines were a bit harder and more funnier.

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Old 08-13-06, 01:23 AM   #2
Mercules
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they say i gotta screw-loose - cuz im crazy wit new rhymes.
they say u gotta screw-loose - cuz ya girl been 'round the block a few times
SLick, ya 3 line approach is too long. it goes for dumb miles
reminds me of my stretchd punchlines; minus the impact, wit, wording & punchlines
ur a newbie. so, save the thug lines & how u'll shoot me.
tiny nig, u makin' that Dimebag from lastweek look like a QP
look, ima take it easy on U. cuz ya spits matter.
i'd still slap ya verse, but im rockn burberry.. & shit splatters

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^^^ face it bitch, its obvious that whole post was of shit...
yeh you got your shit up early...but sent us all back to sleep because of it!

your overrated man, n your bars are like times we fight through...
so we say phew after your verses & wish thats how many lines youd write too

I aint being harsh, I just hope you never live amongst me...
n Im not even close to a bitch...you live in a completely different country


Slick came pretty cool and consistent... butler started dope as fuck and completely lost it toward the end of the verse.. but his first few lines were just enuff to keep the title

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