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Old 08-14-06, 09:14 PM   #1
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"Love Life"

You would love life if your life was filled with love
this is exactly what that wonderful feeling doese
shell fill your life with love, and put love in ya life
she can be the rain of dreams thats flooding your night


She Opens up your chest like she holds the key to ya heart
love is blind and she'll be the bright light that you see in the dark
get you net ready cause she puts them butterflies in ya stomach
so much love you'll wanna die for this woman
And it seems as if she'll do the same at this moment in time
shes that gust of wind that turns ya lame floating to flyin
Her words will romance your thoughts and swooth ya mind
she leave you lost and its so easy for her to move ya time
You'll think you got love nailed, and build a sense of security
You'll learn to see she can heal all wounds verbally
She'll speak the perfect words at that perfect moment
Her love dont cost a buck but you'll still feel like you own it
But that happily ever after dont come for free
that happily ever after dont come for free
willing to pay any price But soon youll see
that happily ever after has the ultimate fee

You would wanna die if your life was filled with love
this is exactly what that terrible feeling doese
she'll fill your life with hate, and put hate in ya life
she'll awake you at night, shes the mistake that you like


now youll work every day at payin the price keeping her
she talks with lies and your believin her seeping words
she keeps a hold on your soul and lives in your mind
you fold when she goese and just try to give it some time
she comes back when your the last choice to be chosen
wanna take it to the next level but you stuck on the loading
screen and she never stops playin these games with ya heart
it feels the same as the start her actions are rearanged ya thoughts
leavin you wondering what if this isn't really ment to be
and its hard to see another dude kissin your destiny
when she gets hurt your the guy she comes runnin to
until finally you get tired of it and tell her im done with you
done with you lookin in my direction while seein another guy
like a lazy eye done bein this stupid safty guy
no longer will you make me cry seein the truth in the way you lie
you played with my life and lost so today ill die

and if every word that comes out of her mouth isnt nothin but lies
you should consider your self one of the luckiest guys
ive had no luck with girls but i still reluctantly try
if every word that comes out of her mouth isnt nothin but lies
you should consider your self on of the luckiest guys
ive had no luck with girls but i still relucklently try
thoughts of the past girls keeps me rubbing my eyes
there all the reasons why im no longer loving my life
but i thank the girls cause they gave me somthin to write


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Old 08-14-06, 09:18 PM   #2
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Old 08-14-06, 09:22 PM   #3
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Old 08-15-06, 08:21 AM   #4
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Old 08-15-06, 09:26 PM   #5
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nice rhyme my dude definenelt keep it up with the topical songs on here alrite........
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Old 08-16-06, 06:33 PM   #6
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Thanks For The Feed Homie

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Old 08-21-06, 12:41 AM   #7
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Old 08-28-06, 11:20 AM   #8
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not bad man, had some cool lines and overall this was solid, i think your main problem is wording, some of these lines just werent worded well, it has nothing to do with your vocab and what words you used its how you used them, it just didnt come off natural and shit. but keep dropping dude. hit up my sweet dreams piece if you can
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Old 09-04-06, 10:05 PM   #9
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decent.

Enjoyed the read, certain bars I would of worded diffrently, but your style is yours.
Good vocab and solid concept, stay dropping bro.
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Old 09-12-06, 10:03 PM   #10
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That shit was NICE keep that up i enjoyed readin that and if you make that an audio its gonna be on my iPod! I can relate to your words somethings could have been changed but the way you switched up the hook after the first verse was fire keep that up. 8.7/10

Go peep Drained Emotions by me just click search and search the OM forums for LexiKon
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Old 09-13-06, 01:10 AM   #11
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i liked these two lines in the frist verse
She Opens up your chest like she holds the key to ya heart
love is blind and she'll be the bright light that you see in the dark

and i liked the emotion in the second verse
and this is so true that you can be blinded by love
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Old 09-13-06, 07:46 AM   #12
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This was nice really liked the opening bars,...

You would love life if your life was filled with love
this is exactly what that wonderful feeling doese
shell fill your life with love, and put love in ya life
she can be the rain of dreams thats flooding your night
Dope

Nice flow vocab was nice can be up-ed a little everyones can to be
fair... Concept was nice. And this was a good read I enjoyed it.

Stay up

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Old 09-14-06, 03:31 PM   #13
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this was really good... flow was good... i think could use some more complex language... not that it really matters but it makes people look clever lol

anyways this was a nice piece... good work...
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