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Old 08-18-06, 11:11 AM   #1
Wordz AhGod
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Test
dude's fresh meat just watch me slaughter this calf
cuz it should be no problem to grab my-stic and break him in half
didn't like this line
start the engine killed him now its time to drive him in a herse
cuz all the Quotes u have are ''nonsince'' u cant right a decent verse
terrible man
kill this herb cuz ur half ass.. but ur verses are just 100% shit
but u tried to 'live' up to ur potential but dude just couldn't afford it
wtf???
since ur 2 and 1 u sucked dick to win ur just a perverted jerk
well i mean u had to plan ahead since real girls and porn movies didn't work
wtf part 2
dunkin this dude its just to easy to take the win
cuz who needs 'ur good punchs' when i just got a "perfect 10"
wtf part 3...self glorification with no punch

You need help dawg. This aint gonna get you through the league man. you really have to work on breaking the other dude down. Use personals, nameplay and other shit. This was a really weak verse man. Try and elevate next time man.

Mystic
You only going 10.your going to need more than that
Standin on the corner have you thinkin ima whore this cat
weak openner but better than anything ^^nigga dropped.
You checked in and accepted my 14..but im merkin ya men
And all ya fucking lines that are far less then a perfect ten
Is that a feed or did both of you think of the same wak line to say? feedings illigal in the league man.
Dont overate ya shit cuz the readers think you need tha help
Shoulda been a man and went 14 you needa ~Test~ ya self
weak name play and punch
Im droppin late cuz i have a life..sorry if you cant accept that
A life and sick lines...man you might just have everything except that
not creative
Technically you dropped twice as I see you edited your verse
Well idk how good the first one was..but after reading
.......................................I guarentee the second ones worse
ok punch but it sounds familiar *wink* *wink*cypher
Ill leave u like manuer haha you just a mound of shit
This site passed every test i swear untill april two thousand n 6
This was the best line of the battle for me. should have came more like this
Its sad but the truth your lack of skill really shows dude
I mean im ashamed to even say that on the net I know you
weak closer

This battle was wak and boring man. I never seen a test verse before but I dont think I'll be looking foward to the next one. that shit was terrible. I expected a lot more from Mystic since he got most of the battle shit down....surprised I aint see one of my lines in this battle but w/e. Mystic had the only quotable of this weak ass battle for real. You should consentrate on coming more like that line rather then more like what your opponent wrote. I know you can drop better man.

V/Mystic

RTF in my battle with pp2
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