Listening - Tight ass beat...flow is kinda off to me, sounds like you reading off a piece of paper..

1st verse - I like how you just came in and let them know who you are and what you bout. FLow is still off a lil...lyrics are there, quality is nice...coo voice.
Hook - I like the hook tha most. Shit is tight ass hell...I like tha energy and delivery on this..flow is on point on tha hook part.
Verse 2- oh wow! I especially like how you came in..that was nice. I think you had the most energy in this verse so far. nice lyrics, quality nice just like I said...
verse 3- coming into these verses are tight. Nice ending verse. Keeps the same energy, but I like how you brought it down, just a lil to let us know it's the ender...you had the best flow in this verse.

Overall- nice track, nice energy...Had me bobbing my head. I can't complain, this was actually a nice track. Nice vocals, I could tell you was feeling tha track, sick ass beat...only thing is your flow was off...it sounded like you was reading it, instead of spitting it.


rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233617

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