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08-12-06, 07:48 PM
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Broke as hell
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My Music (New Track from Shear Kaughn)
IP: B8B4 D1AE
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233295
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2817920 alrighty.....heres a track that i'm gonna put on my mixtape coming out on Aug 28th www.soundclick.com/shearkaughn "My Music" 
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08-12-06, 08:50 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C7F6 C148
Listen'n.....Beat nasty kid like that shit
1st: Concept 100% dog u killed that shit.....flow 1000+ feel me..lmao Hook: is nasty man fuckin bananas dog....like the way u laid that shit...even ur background vocals was clear... 2nd: Wasnt as good as the first verse but deffinitly killed it...i like the presence the energy an the delivery behind it.... Hook:Same 3rd: Nice follow-up to balance it out....flow 100% thats money all-damn-dayyy...lmao Over-all son u murdered this shit...prolly the best track ive heard from u so far...u've came up a lot since i last heard something from u....Good shit Fam keep it 100 my ratin' 10/10 
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08-12-06, 08:53 PM
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O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: B383 052E
Beat's cool.....can't place it, but I know I heard it before. Like a shady or D12 or some shit like that. You got a nice little swag on this shit man. Hook's tight too....nice and simple. You got a nice flow for such a slow ass tempo....I'd have a hard ass time fuckin with this beat, or I'd just use a faster flow or something.....but you did your thing man. Good shit.
Ohh....I got that shit for you that has me, Ecko and Tony.Self on it. I was told to put it on a SC for you to pick up www.soundclick.com/rvstuff It's the top track called What Da Bizness
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08-13-06, 01:04 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: F74A 5C03
good shit...i liked the beat at the begning i wasnt sure but you picked it up as the song went on....good hook too, i like this shit....not much wrong with it...the backround is lame at times thats about it....
*whip it harder*
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08-13-06, 02:04 AM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: 5E52 57E4
Lol sorry for this. But you sound like Afro Man. lol
Beat is nice, another simple beat but it does the job and sounds ill. Specially with your flow, the concept is okay, but what really makes it stand out is the way you approach it and the delivery is just great. Chorus - I like it, catchy. You still sound like Afro man Though. lol
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08-13-06, 02:57 AM
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Broke as hell
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IP: B8B4 D1AE
thank you thank you for the feedback, deeply appreciated
and for the beat.....its Royce da 5'9's "Rock City feat. Eminem" off his Rock City album.. i heard the song and feel in love with the beat
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08-13-06, 03:11 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 15D8 A992
this shit was cool flow was gud through out had a nice swag add libs were coo the hook is coo on point wanna feel my music word lolbeat is tight i like that shit you got my attention gud shit....u sound believable....nice shit yo real chill shit
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08-14-06, 10:16 PM
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~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 2A9D B363
sick shit......ya flow's nice.....ya ridin tha beat like us azns do hondas...lol nah man delivery is interestin...but reminds me of Past Tense.......but yo i'm feelin this track.......hook is catchy too man....ya adlibs are different too....
nice drop... pz ~1~
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08-15-06, 08:23 AM
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I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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IP: 0775 E664
Yup Yup, Shear Kaughn, One of my favourite Emcee's on RV. Hot SHit. the flow on this nice as hell on this kind of track. this fuckin beat is hard as hell. thats another reason. Why this tracks a ceritifed banger. Your mic pressence is dope. Your lyrics is cool. nothing special. but good for this kind of track. but the voice is nice. and the quality is good. The thing that hypes me up is the beat. where theres a hard drum like DUMMM...shits a nice addition. and the chorus is sick too...nice guitars...im feelin this alot..keep it up
8/10
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08-18-06, 03:18 PM
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Put Yo Money On Me
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IP: CB5F 7EEE
Listening - Tight ass beat...flow is kinda off to me, sounds like you reading off a piece of paper..
1st verse - I like how you just came in and let them know who you are and what you bout. FLow is still off a lil...lyrics are there, quality is nice...coo voice. Hook - I like the hook tha most. Shit is tight ass hell...I like tha energy and delivery on this..flow is on point on tha hook part. Verse 2- oh wow! I especially like how you came in..that was nice. I think you had the most energy in this verse so far. nice lyrics, quality nice just like I said... verse 3- coming into these verses are tight. Nice ending verse. Keeps the same energy, but I like how you brought it down, just a lil to let us know it's the ender...you had the best flow in this verse. Overall- nice track, nice energy...Had me bobbing my head. I can't complain, this was actually a nice track. Nice vocals, I could tell you was feeling tha track, sick ass beat...only thing is your flow was off...it sounded like you was reading it, instead of spitting it. rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233617 *shake something*
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