aight it didnt rhyme as the title stated, so I wont say anything about that, otherwise that maybe this should have gone in the poetry section instead because of that, thats if there even is a poetry section here on RV. but this piece seems like a christian writing about losing his faith or maybe falling into temptation and feeling guilty over it, not sure, it was a little all over the place, but its obvious you have alot of things going on in your mind, keep ranting man, its healthy, just get all that stuff off your chest, you sound like your smart and will find out how to do with all ya problems. stay up

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