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Old 08-13-06, 11:05 PM   #1
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Group B: SlicKnife (0-2) vs Flow Intelligent (0-0)

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If you showed last week, good.. I'm proud of you. But if you no-showed and were given a second chance DON'T fuck it up. Cause you'll be out. Some have moved up to 2-0 and are looking strong, while some are slumping at 0-2. Whatever the record.. it doesnt clinch anything. You still gotta go at you opponents and take their heads off. This week I want to see everyone show up AND vote. A couple battles had two losers last week due to not voting and leaving links. I'm not hunting for links so post em up or I'm DQing you. Show me somethin this week..

Battler #1: Flow Intelligent
Battler #2: SlicKnife

Battles go up Sunday night
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)
5 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding IS allowed. Each person will have the chance to feed if they want to. You will not be penalized for feeding.
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.. sway and lose. Don't do it and you wont be DQ'ed
- Voting rules are being enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. Even if it's a no show win, if you dont leave links.. you lose.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now as there are alot of updates.
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Old 08-14-06, 07:39 PM   #2
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Check Slick
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Old 08-15-06, 10:23 PM   #3
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check in........
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Old 08-16-06, 08:28 PM   #4
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble
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Old 08-17-06, 11:44 PM   #5
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^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed
fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!
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Old 08-18-06, 12:04 AM   #6
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Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids
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Old 08-18-06, 10:45 AM   #8
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble
I felt this comparison was just not that witty and a bit weak

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed
setup was a bit strange, but punch was cool
fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!
okay, not quotable, but a decent concept that ya executed well

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids
I'm not a fan of these "threat" punches unless they're overly witty n' harsh.. this wasn't.

I feel Slic got this pretty easily. Flow, just try bein' a bit more creative if ya gonna use "comparison" type punches cuz yours were a bit too basic. Both of Slic's punches were above average so I got him winning this.

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Old 08-18-06, 07:57 PM   #9
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble

-- this was decent at best, but other than that it was weak

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed

-- ok punch, not that hard

fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!

-- concept was good but worded horribly

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids

-- this was weak, not ahrsh enough

vote-Slick...he had 1 good punch with 1 punch that coulda been good...Flow had maybe 1 decent punch and 1 weak punch...
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Old 08-19-06, 03:52 PM   #10
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Can we get some more votes on this?
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Old 08-19-06, 06:23 PM   #11
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble
~~eh.,..could of been worded better ~~

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids
~~Lol..nice way 2 finish~~

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed
~~lol..oooowwww lmao~~

fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!
~~lol..uhhh iight punch~~

This battle was close in my eyes..but it came down to 1 major punch
and that was Slicks never landed punch
thats what got it 4 me

v/Slick
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Old 08-20-06, 08:35 PM   #13
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could do with more votes
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Old 08-20-06, 08:43 PM   #14
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble

not feelin it

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids

okay setup...good idea..weak execution

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed

could have been worded better but good

fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!

he'll never be the topic? ok....pretty redundant..but whatev



flow came weak..slick had one good punch..vote..slickknife
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Old 08-20-06, 10:13 PM   #15
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Slick it seems ya heads gettin big, So ill disperse this bubble
Cuz like doin something bad, You just aint worth the trouble

^wtf.. that was brutal.

^^^ a like punch huh? but, it should be better branded...
I can feel that shit in the air...which explains why it never landed

-alright i guess..

fuck battles son – write a story, nothing but heavenly...
but fuck the topic<<< because we ALL KNOW thats something youll never be!

ok not bad?

Slick lets be honest, Bar for bar i'll lyrically sweep this bitch
Just lay down
Or ill have you fightin to stay up more than disobediant kids

lol, not bad but the settup was really weak. try to hit with every line whenever possible

v. slick for a better overall battle








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